This story and pairing are truly underrated ! The concept was formidable and i almost squealed at the mention of the cat bureau ! Thank you so much for sharing your work, sO pleasant to read and get lost in !

Well I finally got around to reading this
Not bad for a beginning
I’m very intrigued
Will read the rest when I get the time

Oh good chapters.

Natori is a fangirl and is warching his otp becoming canon :3 love your story

Excellent!
Another great work of writing, and a good sequel as well!
Very nice!

This story was great! Especially with the seperate endings for each significant character! And I'm glad that the Baron was able to make an appearance and save the day! Great job, loved every moment of it! XD

This was so cute! I love HaruxLune!

The story was nice and a complete turn-around from the original plot of The cat Returns. However, i hope that you mind the typos next time and don't give out a certain even or point in the story that you will not later emphasize. Like, who's the orange cat girl that saw reginald and what happened after that? Or who's the girl baron was so worried about? Be careful with what you put in and not make readers expect for nothing. But all in all, it was A-okay!

tat waz such a cute ending! i luved it! great work on the whole thing!

oooooh! even mooore suspense! did reginald land back at the bureau? because it certainly does to me! i feel so bad for lune... he almost had her in his hands! OH THE CRUEL FATE! XD great chap!

I've noticed there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes here.

and wow, the cat bureau is going to make a cameo yays!

OOOOOOOOH! so THIS is where baron, muta, and toto come in! XD n even if haru is kidnapped i'm so happy the 2 are finally wed!

finally lune found out! it took long enough! i'm interested in how reginald plans to execute his little plan of kidnapping haru! keep up the good work!

yaaaayyyyyyy! go natori! u rock!XD i can't wait to c how everything turns out! keep up the amazing work!

awwww...! poor haru! this isn't fair! don't b fooled lune! bring the real haru baaaakkk! aah... suspense... can't wait until the next chap iz out!