Love it please write more

Chapter 2 is great. More drama. More angst.

A baby is coming. Wonderful.

Yeah, the McBride's are truly the poster family for dysfunction and asinine faults. How Clark escaped both those traits and having literally escaped by default of being kicked out is a miracle.

I think James Kent is so cool. And gay to boot. Hot.

I just know Martin is coming across like a Sargent Major, but I'm hoping he's cool too.

How can one go wrong with Martha and Jonathan Kent.

So far I'm loving everyone but the McBride's and Pete Ross.

Oh, by the way, my name is Thom.

I love this first chapter.

All the McBride family exception of Clark are assholes. No class, full of greed, only seem to think about themselves. Clark is a polar opposite young man compared to them.

Lex seems lonely despite his wealth and apparent popularity.

Clark and Lex are a Ying y Yang together. Separate from each other they're lost, together them seem to complete and compliment the other, making each other whole. I am guessing this is when Lex and Clark create their baby?

SERIOUSLY 15 not in this day that people have a baby or sex ,not that I know of but I think some rarely do. though I saw a video on youtube where a 12 or 13 year old wanted to have her own since some people get pregnant in high school a lot.

This was truly a great read. Finished it all in one day. I honestly couldn't take a break not even during my meals haha. It has even inspired the writer inside of me to work on my own take on Clex. It is my current obsession after all.

Anyways, i look forward to reading everything else you have worked on!

LOVE IT GOOD STORY :)

This was great. Thanks for sharing.

i would just like to point out that i really like this story. the thing i am struggling with, is that clark made it too easy for lex to earn his trust.
i would have liked it if clark was a little more rough around the edges, with him being the one to tell lex off.
but i like to read more about condition.

OMG. THIS WAS AWESOME! If you make more please tell me.

Curious, you put" Finis…..or is it? " did you ever continue the story? i like it. do you have it in PDF form?

Oh my! Please is there a sequel? I couldn't get enough! *blushes*

please put another two chapters in! The next chapter could be Mood swings and the final chapter could be hapily ever after!

This story is really good and I enjoyed how you resolved conflicts without going overboard. Fantastic stuff.

I love this story so much!

I would love a sequel to this story.

Cant wait for more!

hi, for starters i would like to say that you are an amazing writer its just that i was irritated by 3 things

1. whitney- he was very annoying, and i think you went to far, i mean he was to obsessed with clark it wasnt as creepy as it should have been it was just plain annoying and he just came back again and again and again...

2. "the MacBirde family"- you took whitneys obsession, annoyance, whining and the wanting of clark into his old family...

3. it took like 3 years before clark and lex to meet again! seriously?

the rest of your story was good dont think anything else (even if you think im complaining to much) and excuse me if i have misspelled a lot im from sweden and im not so good with spelling.

bye3