Well for starters
If it was summer, no hogwarts
And my inner grammar natzi is poking through
But otherwise this was great

The middle needsa be broken up. Bad grammar.

! I can only repay you those words! I love you right now! So amazing! Thank god they love eachother. I am the biggest hhr fan.

Giuliette Rose

not realistic... but good.

Wait is it summer or not? They are at school... but Hermione is wearing a skit cus its summer... ll

And what happens when McGonagall or the senior girls prefect bypasses her locking charms? ROFLOL. That or the girls are very envious and want details.

This simply doesn't make sense. Harry is with Ginny and Hermione is with Ron, and they have only a basic attraction with each other, and suddenly Hermione wears revealing clothes, they have sex and they love each other. How do you think that works? In a real life scenario, they'd be broken up and never talking again in two weeks.

great! cute! love it!

poor ron and ginny