Badass Hermione! :D

I agree entirely on the descriptions of Hermione. I'd hope Ron never got quite that bad, having matured by the end of the War, but it could suit.

Seems unnecessarily Ron-bashy. Ron stood on a broken leg to proclaim to (what he thought was) a mass-murdering Death Eater that if he wanted to kill Harry, he'd have to do it over his dead body. Ron - a pureblood who could have sat out the war - joined his friends to go after the horcruxes, and it took wearing one around his neck to give him a mere moment of weakness (which turned into a longer period due to bad luck and Hermione's concealment skills). Ron had stood by Harry during bad times as well as good.

Yes. Just...there aren't any words adequate enough to really describe how much I love this. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us.

... words fail me. Although "beautiful" comes close.

Great story! I really liked it!

gw

...creepy...

But good! It gave me chills. :D

this is an awesome little story. its so short its almost a drablle, but not quite. it's very dramatic, and i can't help but love it.

Normally i am not a fan of evil/mean!ron, because he is and okay annoying, but... when you explain it like you did...

One thing, though. i noticed that you wrote 'molly or the twins'. i presume this is set after DH, so shouldn't fred be dead? its not important, but i thought i may as well mention it.

all in all, an awesome little story :) *favourites)*

I know this is marked as "complete", but you could expand it to explain why Ron was after Harry and whether Harry ever gets caught. It's a good little story too - it's quite dramatic and I like the bit where Hermione smiles to herself at the end.

Thanks :)