| Reviews for Obliviate |
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Guest chapter 6 . 7/10 This is so cool. |
YeCatsJ chapter 12 . 7/12 Loved this |
ThreateningMedicine chapter 12 . 3/31 The first chapter was BAD, but it really took a turn for the better! Maybe try rewriting the first chapter. |
ThreateningMedicine chapter 1 . 3/30 Don't use the word 'orbs'. They're overused. |
Newest Reader chapter 12 . 2/16 It was short and simple, but had lots of meaning. Was adorable and I loved it. |
rowenasheir chapter 12 . 10/15/2019 Love to see how they got adopt Tom, or did Sev? |
Diddleymaz chapter 12 . 8/24/2018 Truly good |
MimiTaylor chapter 12 . 8/30/2017 I loved it! So great! That one chapter that muddled my brain made more sense after the newspaper article. I love a truly happy Harry! |
MimiTaylor chapter 9 . 8/29/2017 Yikes! That was a tough chapter to wrap my head around. I got the whole of it but I think I might have got too much firewhiskey to the brain. . .thru magic, I guess. |
MimiTaylor chapter 8 . 8/29/2017 THAT was a lovely bunch of fluffy filler! |
MimiTaylor chapter 6 . 8/29/2017 My first thought was breaking the bond between Snape and Voldemort, then Harry and Voldemort. |
MimiTaylor chapter 3 . 8/29/2017 I hope Harry can keep the happiness going! Love the intro to Draco! |
MimiTaylor chapter 2 . 8/29/2017 OhmyGOSH this is so brilliant! Gotta love Luna. She always seemed to know what Harry Potter needed to hear and looks like the same goes for Harry. |
MimiTaylor chapter 1 . 8/29/2017 That was one of the best first chapters I've read in a long time. Perfect set up! |
OneAppleLeaf chapter 12 . 3/16/2017 Uwaaah, this is really one of the best fanfics that i really like out there! It's started thrilled, then a bit sad, fluffy and joyous, getting a bit dark and back to the fluffy again. I never read Harry being so carefree, and to say I'm happy too is just mildly summarized it xD. It's sadden me that Hermione and Ron was not included in Harry's new life though, but the newfound 'brothers' certainly giving it's kick. I love the tattoos, but I think it's more logical for just the kids to have it, having Snape and Sirius wore a 'teenage' marks just seems a bit farfetched to me. The living arrangements for the summer seems nice, but again, it seems a bit rushed to made Snape and Sirius living in the same roof even for just a few months so soon after their initial tolerance. And what's happened to Draco's mom? It's not very clear how the deatheaters are treat afterwards, but then again the story itself was so simple and fluffy, so i actually don't really mind, haha. Lastly, Tom. Or ex-Voldie, lol. I dunno whether to laugh or not seeing the once oh so powerful dark mage being reduced to a 'mere' child. But even if he's actually innocent I think it's still fair to give him a trial for what had he/ the other him done (or maybe he did? But it's just not mentioned in the brief epilogue?). Parsel magic also seems so cool, it might be nice if you can explore more of what it and Harry capables of doing. Wait. What are Harry's job again? It'd be nice seeing the sequel. Thanks for the wonderful treat! ~lil Semanggi |