Reviews for Immortal
Issexwithyourcloneincest chapter 10 . 7/15
Finally the bad guy wins!
reiwil10 chapter 10 . 6/25
Plot and character development could have been better but overall a very good story for a quick read. I really enjoyed it.
JustAFan chapter 1 . 9/29/2019
Avatar Wan was the first Avatar.
Jarvis R. Yeriel chapter 10 . 8/16/2019
This fanfic reminds me of a Lobo comic.

Yes, it's stupid and contrived. Yes, The Bad Guy Wins. Yes, the main character is an unapologetic Jerkass Mary Sue.

But that doesn't stop it from being a lot of dumb fun. Plus, it was really sweet and romantic to see Naruto keeping Azula sane like that. Considering the state that Avatar's canon left her in.

Overall, I consider this fanfic a newfound guilty pleasure of mine.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/1/2019
I’m glad I read this !
sasukesdoom chapter 10 . 6/10/2019
lol very interesting ending XD
LustOfSex chapter 10 . 12/20/2018
Awesome!
metacllica chapter 10 . 10/7/2018
This was a fun story.
Mariusz1988 chapter 10 . 8/25/2018
Awesome story, hot hot hot "plot" hahahaha
Kv1n20 chapter 10 . 8/25/2018
Bit dark but pretty cool a read.
HashtagJustMonika chapter 10 . 6/18/2018
I absolutely loved this story...so glad it happy ending for one of my fave OTP's
itsjayjman chapter 10 . 2/9/2018
great story :) the 1st avatar's name is Wan btw
maya7020 chapter 10 . 6/29/2017
It was an awesome story but what happened to sokka
ByUzumaky3000 chapter 10 . 6/25/2017
Me encantó es una pena que se acabara
YeTianshi chapter 7 . 6/21/2017
I dislike the way Azula thinks about Naruto. I mean, she doesn't seem to trust him, but rather believes that he simply couldn't betray her because she owns him, or that she'd simply beat him back down if he did. That's not trust, it's more like denial, especially when she should know that she can't match him.
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