This is an awesome story loved it! Although olivia kinna irritated me a lil in the end lol she totally pulled what lucas did to her on peter i wonder if she ever realized she did that? Anyways on to the sequel.

Ohh my god beautiful fic i loveeeeee! Thankss

hey i just wanted to let you know that your fics are amazing, i have read the trilogy and the etta story, they blew my mind :) i was do sad when fringe was over so i'm so happy to have found your stories ! keep being awesome and happy holidays all the way from belgium !

I have to say, I really like how you portray John in this story. All too often with Fringe fanfics, there is a ton of John bashing. I'll admit that I don't really care for him (I'm a HUGE polivia shipper) but I think that its great that you write him in a positive light. I think that its really important to show him as the man that Olivia fell inlove with, not the bastard that broke her heart. All in all great story!

So I just started reading this story, and I realize that it was posted well over 2 years ago, but I have to comment and say that I absolutely love it thus far! I'm usually quite reluctant to read Fringe fanfictions, because nobody seems quite able to portray the characters accurately, save to throw in a few of their more famous lines every now and again. But I think you've got it down to an art here, and I think that's great! I'm looking forward to reading the rest! :D

I actually cried! I never cry! At anything! Best story I've read in a long while, when Olivia walked out on the bedroom after they'd slept together I don't know what came over me.

Can't wait to read the sequel!

Well done!

Hey!

After being hooked on 'To Build a Home' I started reading this one. AWESOME!

And I'm really glad that it's all done already cuz I just hate waiting for the next chapter.

And now... I'm gonna read 'Boston'. I'm glad that's all done too.

I loved this story. On chapter 31 I saw Olivia was picking out a ring. I was sad because I thought her and John got together and also her and Peter wouldn't have a chance. Then I read charlies name and was like what happened to Sonia, then you mentioned it was for Sonia. It was overall AMAZING. interesting. Looking forward to the series

When I read bowling I screamed sam Weiss. I hope it's true.

Just started reading and I loved it, it has a very talented writting, good work

OMG YOUR STORY WAS AWESOME! When she almost got raped I was like NOOOOOOO! but when I saw that she blinded him I was like YEAH! GO OLIVIA! I read this entire story in a day, and I must say I am completely impressed, and I think you are a very talented writer. I love seeing other people that could be around my age writing all these great stories, it makes me feel that my majoring in creative writing isn't a crappy idea. I'm about to go read the sequal, YAY! hahaha:)

I loved how you repeated the part from when Olivia first got to the Academy, about the breathing smoke. It made a really cool echo

there are serious tears leaking out my eyes right now, god, just...god

I just cried

I've been reading this whole story for the last day, and not only it is HUGE but also PERFECT! I've loved the characters, how you've managed to introduce actual show quotes, all the situations... everything!

So I just can say: congratulations! I'm glad there is a sequel, I'll start reading it soon. Thank you for making me enjoy this fic that much!