Reviews for Stay
bonnemine82 chapter 6 . 2/15/2019
pas mal! intéressant...la réaction de la mère est ambigu mais je la rencontre fréquemment dans mon travail... Le rejet des jeunes gens du fait de leur orientation de sexe ou de genre est de plus en plus d'actualité... malheureusement...
Merci pour cette histoire.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/22/2018
This literally kills me. Its just so cute and fluffy and sweet and so damn sexy I feel like i sinned. I fvking love it.
AnonymousM chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
Wow! I've read this story twice already! Your characters are really well-developed, and I like how you wrote your plot progression as well. This pairing isn't one I've ever really read before, so I can't compare it to others in that sense, but as an overall fic, I thought it was really great!
bellawu chapter 6 . 10/25/2017
i will follow this story just in case you will continue. thanks. i love it
bellawu chapter 1 . 10/25/2017
im glad their relationship finally work out
dpennell007 chapter 6 . 12/12/2016
I would have loved this even if it turned out to be just a one-shot, but the added chapters were a bonus! The watching, but pretending to be not watching each other bits almost killed me. I couldn't wait MORE than they couldn't wait. Dang. Excellent work!
mindluver chapter 6 . 11/7/2015
Really great. Thanks for sharing.
mindluver chapter 5 . 11/7/2015
Go Edward.
mindluver chapter 4 . 11/7/2015
sweet.
mindluver chapter 3 . 11/7/2015
Whew...I need a ciggy
mindluver chapter 2 . 11/7/2015
Loved it!
mindluver chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
So great!
Hare and Heron chapter 6 . 8/25/2015
Really, now. 2015 and yet you are still getting reviews! Congratulations!
I really enjoyed this story (I would honestly say that this one and White Dress are my two favorites right now), you know? Though it had me feeling like it would have a sad, sad ending (I can't quite stomach those). Also, I personally enjoy the parentheses, and I don't think you used too many. They are alright when you use them to provide a certain 'something more' that adds to the feeling and, again personally, I find that I enjoyed the 'something more' that you created in my mind.
Thank you very much for writing!
Fanfic-Critic1805 chapter 6 . 4/14/2015
This was very, very cute and sinfully sexy. However, relationships with an age difference of more than 10 years IRL kind of creep me out XD. There weren't too many grammar errors but there were a couple of issues with addition of unnecessary words/letters in this chapter and in the first one. Also there were times when you used an excessive amount of parentheses where italics would have worked just as well and looked better. Just out of curiosity, why did you choose to go with them just noticing each other for the first time instead of some seemingly unrequited crush or pining? That aspect of their relationship really set this fic apart from other older/younger,student/professor pairings so nice job. I really enjoyed reading this fic so your overall rating is 4.5/5
jackson 179 chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
Loved it...amazing no other words
When is next chapter coming up?
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