This is such an amazing story! I love it! Teddy is such a awesome guy. James is hilarious!

It'd be really lovely if you could write more. c:

Oh, you should definitely update this! I've really been loving Teddy/Victoire stories (and am finally writing one, too!) and this is such a great set-up. Your story is well written and you're fleshing out the characters nicely...I really like the pace that you're building the Teddy/Victoire relationship. Really, the anticipation is always better than the resolution. Hope to see more soon.

Sounds interesting. I can't really comment your writing style, since it's only the first chapter, but I do think your spelling and grammar were pretty good ( I only speak English as a second language, and it's 1:00 am, so if there were mistakes, I didn't notice them') I hope you update soon 3

I love the entire idea of this story. James was adorable, and it's easy to relate to Victorie. I feel like i think the same way she does. I truly do love it already and can't wait until the next update! (: