so absolutely divine. Thanks for sharing!

Gorgeous. I love the idea of Josh and Donna being domestic and the imagery of him being either rounded or cleaned is wonderful.

This was absolutely lovely. Great writing, true to characters.

Oh my goodness. I loved this! It started out like happy, domestic Josh and Donna, and then took a turn and became slightly angsty... in a good way. You seem to have a knack for getting to the heart of characters' emotions and thoughts.

"I regret lots of things…" and the unsaid litany of apologies, misdirection, emotional detours and hospital corridors threatens just for a moment to overwhelm them both.

~I just loved that line. So poetic.

Superb!

I was so sure I'd reviewed this, but my retrospective of West Wing stories that make me happy shows me I didn't. So I'm rectifying that right now.

I love the way you write.

You have a marvelously lyrical quality to your writing, which I love. Very well-written and carefully crafted. I like your imagery as well (you do a lovely subtle job with Donna's hair, for instance).

Keep it up. Love what I've read from you so far.

This was great! I always saw them together for some reason.. :D

I love this - I am just getting into WW again with my husband and I'm getting caught up in all the J/D romance... this is just perfect! It feels very true to the series. Well done! :)

I loved this! Very sweet.

I know I already reviewed this when you posted it on JDFF, but I thought I'd do so here, too. Love this piece! Very "Josh and Donna."

This deserves more reviews! A lovely little moment, beautifully written. Thank you so much for sharing. :) HL.

Superbly written, thanks

That was just adorable. Thanks for sharing.