| Reviews for Can't Love Me |
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RipJawWolfFang chapter 1 . 7/3/2012 Omg that's depressing! Half expected mello to kill matt though rather then leavi g him totally alone |
coolwolfgirl chapter 1 . 1/3/2012 Another beautifully written piece of literature. I definitely feel horrid now that I have found myself to actually love the way your stories can make me cry. I pity this couple so much because most of your stories of them are quite depressing. But nonetheless they are one of my all-time-favorites. I loved the way you drew tension and suspense in the beginning: without giving any detail on why Matt wasn't responding or rather why did it seemed as if Matt ignored Mello. My favorite line in the whole story was ~ "Bye Matty..." he whispered with a harsh expelling of breath. It was always 'see you later', or 'I'll be back soon'... but it really was goodbye. He left his bag on the table, with things he'd been keeping for Matt, and practically stumbled through the door, letting it close behind him. Unseen to Mello, a solitary tear slipped down Matt's cheek.~ Those few sentences sent tears streaming. And the way you made Mello think that it isn't really an "accident" made it even sadder. Plain to view, Matt had committed suicide. And it was because of Mello. Quite painful story, but very lovable. Keep up the great work! |
The Original Gamer chapter 1 . 2/25/2011 Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. My happy bubble has been popped. ...but I don't mind. That was terribly sad, but I still enjoyed it...In the way you can enjoy something like that, anyway XD You are really a spectacular author, y'know? c: |
MostlyxShortxStories chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 Damn myself for being an emotional masochist and reading this over and over. This is so beautiful, and I cry every time I read it. Poor Matt. I wonder what went through his mind the whole time Mello was there, hint hint. A chapter with Matt's thoughts would be nice, hint hint. Heh, but I loved it so much. It's just so sad ad beautifully written. |
Tasha-Nik chapter 1 . 12/21/2010 That was depressingly sad but I loved it :) it would be kinda cool if you decided to continue it. I'm not exactly sure how but somehw it feels like if you felt like it there could be more I totally love MelloxMatt 3 awesome fic |
tealeyedmoon69 chapter 1 . 12/10/2010 It feels like a piece of my heart is missing now... poor Matt and Mello. This was really well written. |
ThatFoxyGrin chapter 1 . 10/16/2010 -wipes unshed tears- That was horribly sad and beautiful. So very sad, poor Matt! |
ineedmesometea chapter 1 . 9/10/2010 Well, I hope you're proud of your self. You made me freaking cry. One of the sweetest, sadest stories ever. Amazing. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2010 This was soooo well written! I'm crying a lil' bit on the inside. :( Don't worry Mello - one day you'll get your happy ending! |
MeteorMello chapter 1 . 8/21/2010 How sad! D: But your ideas are really amazing. These sad oneshots are the best, making me cry every time OO |
x.doitsu.x chapter 1 . 8/8/2010 Holy shit. I've read crap that was depressing and wanted to make me cry, but I never did. But when I read this, I literally began to bawl my eyes out. xD This was a beautiful story. The last sentence was sad..;~; |
Hedonism chapter 1 . 7/30/2010 I-... that was-... Dangit. I never cry over reading things, what the heck? That was horribly depressing and it makes me want to smack you with a smelly fish for that (or something). 8[ But I can't because you are an amazing writer and it was beautiful at the same time. Boo. /throws tissues at instead. fav'd |
critter141151 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010 ;_; Beautifully sad DX |
Misha2011 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010 ( I wish i could say it was 'short and sweet'...but...that wasn't sweet at all...it was sad ( I liked it...but it was sad... |
schoolkid chapter 1 . 7/27/2010 oh that was so sad! |