This... could've been a lot shorter. Probably should've been, too. But, it wasn't necessarily a bad read, just too stretched.

:3 so almost four years after this stopped updating, of course I get a late start into the fandom and read this ravenously for days on end and it was absolutely brilliant! I would love an epilogue to wrap things up! But, as forgiving as we must be to Tessa then forgiving we will be to you as well. This was an absolutely phenomenal short story. I think about it often! Endless praise to you, honestly. I look forward to reading more of your work 3 thank-you

Hodgepodge. I love that word. Veser's kind of being an enormous bitch. I'm intrigued as to how that's going to pan out. Awww, Tibenoch is being all paternal and caring! The big softy.
Once again, love your grammar and use of rhetoric. X)

Oh my god. Never stop writing. I literally had to stop part-way through the chapter because of the amazing expressions you used and HOLY CRAP YOUR ASYNDETON. This is amazing. I'm reading whatever else you've written. This has to be one of the best HINABN fics I've ever read. Thank you, and keep being awesome. PROPER USE OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE FOR THE WIN!

Buh? Wuh? Where is the epilogue? ;n;

Wonderfully delving into character's. An enjoyable emotional roller-coaster. Please add that last chapter/epilogue?

sweet baby Moses in a handbasket. greatest sentence ever written on earth.

Oh you glorious person, why must you kill me so? This is so fucking fabulous you don't even know. I laughed, I cried, I laughed again, and then I died. I love this fan fiction. It is the best. Like, ever.
Epilogue, please? :3

Just read the entire thing in one sitting. You are better than many published authors, honestly. Well done.

Finally, after 2 weeks, I finished this.

I laughed, I cried, I spazzed from all the hot.

This is a very beautiful fanfiction. I was hooked from Chapter 1. This is a fanfiction that I will read over and over for years to come. It was absolute perfection.

I know you haven't posted the epilogue, but the way it ended gave me some closure. I would love to see the epilogue, though, if you ever post it!

You have all my love. Thank you for this wonderful story.

Woman, don't you dare pull the same act as tess. Don't you fucking dare.

Don't.
You.
Fucking.
Dare.

I demand you update this year 'cuz is you don't I swear i'm going to die.

-Keyboard spam- I just re-read this and Im dying to know if it will ever be continued? ; A;
This is just so amazing.

I don't see where people are coming from if they are hating on this, I think it's awesome :)

I hadn't written a review for your previous chapters, but that's because I've been addicted to this story. I like how you made these characters the way they are. True, you may not have ownership of them but your version of them. . .wow. I'm curious about other characters from the comic thus far, if and when they might appear in the next chapters.
Also, I kinda feel sorry for Conrad; no matter what, he's always gets the short end of the stick. I wonder if things will look up for him in the story, aside from having the friends that he does. He may not express it, but he seems content with them.

Where's you go? This has to be one of the best multi chapter fanfics I've ever read, but the hiatus is killing me! Come back to us poor Hanna fans, put our suspense out of its misery...

On a more cheerful note, I hope your health is better.

I rather liked it.