What an incredible story - I was fighting back the tears at the end. Beautiful, simply beautiful. Thank you.

Wow. That was beautiful. And tragic. And just honest-to-god perfect.

I know you probably haven’t looked at this in a while, but I don’t know if you understand how hard it is to find a good, well-written story like this on here. I love it, everyone’s in character, and you’re a good writer.

very unique and awesome

Awesome

Awwwww man the FEELS

Oh, that was so incredibly sweet. I loved especially the part about Sam being tied to Dean's soul. That was really touching. Very well written and creative.

Oh my goodness. If I thought watching Swan Song was painful...you just brought it to a whole new level. I am a little puddle of tears at the moment. Wow. This was a beautiful story.

Oh my gosh, this is so heartbreakingly beautiful! I love it so much. The way you wrote their connection by knowing instinctively where the other is and responding to each other's jibes/needs, it was perfect. I felt both their pain like it was my own. This is so, so good. Your writing is absolutely amazing! Thanks so much for sharing!

Oh this was wonderful! Heartbreaking but warming at the same time. Like ugh you make it hurt so good. Loved the bond between them in this! Codependent brothers are my kind of brothers and I soooo dug this. Thanks for writing! Great story

That was so sad, but beautiful at the same time! Thanks so much for writing.

I loved this so much.

Oh, my God. That was absolutely amazing.

I usually hate character death fics (especially Sam), which is why I always scrolled past this story when I saw it, but I finally sucked it up and clicked it after about the sixth time I found it recommended on SPN story-finder, and I am so glad I did.

The way this was written was beautiful and to the point, every scene had a purpose, there was no extra fluff, and the descriptions were enough to paint the scene without needless detail or clunky long paragraphs that go off on tangents.

I really enjoyed the soul-mate-brother-bond thing you had between them, how Sam was Dean's anchor in reality just as much as Dean was Sam's. Missouri was an awesome, supportive character who really connected the boys in a definitive way before Sam figured out he could type, even if Dean knew exactly how Sam would react to what he would say. The way that Dean and Sam were so desperate to communicate with each other in any form that they included Missouri into their emotional private moments without blinking an eye. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!

"But I'm not afraid of dying if it means I'll see you again."
You broke my heart here. I love brotherly moments like this, especially how it's tinged with angst and longing. And Sam's reply was a perfect mix of understanding, sadness, and afraid that Dean would purposefully off himself to just see his brother again.

Overall, I absolutely loved it. 10/10 would read again. 10/10 would review again. 10/10 would recommend. Ha, rhymes.

Thanks for writing and publishing such a great piece. Gems like this story is why I read fan fiction.

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Loved this story.

Holy Crap! I don't think I have ever bawled so much over a short story in my whole life! And I HATE bawling! Wow, that was incredibly sad and fun all at the same time, and I will even say I think that this was one of the best stories I have ever read on FanFiction.

I was at the Supernatural Convention were Jensen talked about this dream he had about the last episode of the show. He said that he dreamt that Dean was driving the Impala all alone and then he stopped and he traded the Impala for a motor cycle because Sam was dead and Dean didn't need a passenger seat anymore. Jensen .said that he thought that was how he'd like Supernatural to end.

Your story reminded me a bit of that, and it is just how I'd picture it as well. It seems natural to me that it would be Sam who is the one who dies and that Dean must struggle on alone. And it would seem natural to me as well that Sam would choose to become a ghost rather than leave his brother.
So, thanks for that. Thanks for the half empty Kleenex box, the stuffy nose, and the puffy eyes!

And as much as l love this story...please no sequels! I don't know if I have enough Kleenex for that!