Oh, I like the ending! You know this means you must write more, and right now, right? Right?

I also like looking at the relationship from Alistair's eyes, like the comments about how other women's faces look bland now - I always think about it from my Dalish's perspective so that was great! And the conundrum that Idun is in with fighting Flemeth or not is great - a much more difficult choice than most Wardens face.

Sandi wants more more more!

this is a great story, well written and in character. I like the twists you have done with the story as well, the meeting of flemeth as a child etc. I cant wait until the next installment!