This is amazing...️️

are you updating soon?

I love this book too bad it was last updated in 2010

The story started off pretty ingesting and I actually started to fall in love with it but by the end it just felt like to many plot holes or inconsistencies. 1 being the wolf treaty their was even a point where the Cullen's even feared going to war with the pack because they bit Jacob yet that didn't even seem like an option, does the treaty not applied to people of the pack that are bitten because there wasn't literally no action and they easily exiled Jake like nothing. 2. Jacobs dad is one of the Rez elders and he couldn't seem to pull any strings for Jake given the very out of the ordinary situation not to mention the father wouldn't have let Jacob go that easily with out a fight even against the tribe.. 3, Alice seems pretty useless in this story so you mean to tell me she couldn't see the after math of Edward biting Jacob? Because Ik she couldn't see him actually do it but I'm sure she still should have been able to see Edwards future and what he would have done she also wasn't even able to see the bullies bothering Jacob either and I would hope at this point where he's a hybrid and was also not connected to the pack should have allowed to see some of jakes future. i also didn't like how delicate you made jakes character like I get he was traumatized by Edward but that shouldn't have stopped him as much as it did with certain things like I mean come on he's a werewolve that killed vampires and was eating human food in he form of biggers pizza steak etc but he can't can't kill a deer for it's blood? when technically it's no different then how he was living before. I also wasn't a huge fan of the gift choice or giving Jacob a gift to begin with since he was a hybrid and considering his situation I felt like Jacob needed a more emotional gift similar to Jasper's but maybe more potent, him being as easily injuried as he was from the bully and the excuse used was also something I didn't like first off Jake would have beaten the snot out of them but to some reason this Jake in the story is like a girl that needs protecting and I'm not a fan regardless of his "changing DNA" he shouldn't have been so easily pushed or injuried by a human that logic made no sense to me. Now one this I was actually happy and expecting was Bella, but I wondered exactly what was her relationship with Edward because the normal Edward regardless of Jacob would have still checked in with Bella although I liked that all of Edwards attention was on Jacob and maybe showed that he was developing some sort of bond I'm just curious and interested to see how deep does his relationship go with Bella because even prior to her he would watch Jacob sleep and question his feelings that drawn him to Jacob...Bella was a nice plot device despite how annoying she got with in the last two chapters i purely just want to see the depth of His devotion to Jacob against Bella or how series they were in this story, sadly I guess we won't see that happen since you didn't finish the story it was ok but it definetly had some flaws and just personality traits that I wasn't a fan of.

Are you ever gonna update?

I wanted to cry when I realised I couldn't go to the ext chapter. I'm begging please update.

Wahhhhhhhh! How could it end here? Edward and Jacob aren't even together together yet! Please update. Normally I only read completed stories but this one just drew me in from the first sentence!

Update soon. Don't leave the story hanging.

Please update this fanfics soon! I would love to know what happens next!

Please continue with the story

Hey, I think this is a really interesting story. But one thing that bothers me is that it's taking forever for Edward and Jacob to have feelings for each other. Well, more like Jacob to have feelings, and Edward to realize the feelings he has. Also, where the heck has Bella disappeared to? You gonna explain that soon? And, just wondering, but how many chapters are you planning on this story having? Just wondering; don't have to tell me. Hope my review doesn't suck, I don't right reviews a lot.

I know it's been 5 years, but I would have loved to keep reading and see it completed. Oh well. I just finish it in my head.

LOL ITS BEEN FOUR YEARS

0_0 BEST STORY EVER. Bella ignorance, edward and jacob tiny feels, in charachter Alice and other vampires/people. *sigh* please update! TuT

Please continue writing. This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I keep reading it over and over. I need you to continue.