This is so sweet!

Wow. That was like one of those hella real Indie movies that leaves you all contented and in touch with humanity at the end

Awww thank uou for sharing your story!

Soooo gooood!~ I really liked the whole slow and realistic process. At one point I got really nervous because I thought 'oh lord, he's going to give her an ultimatum!' Amazing fic! Why doesn't it get more reviews and favs?! Come on people! u

I love it!

Aw! How cute 3 I thought Kyoko was a bit OOC, but I suppose since she's older, she'd be a bit more jaded.

That was utterly realistic and adorable. I loved every bit of it.

I love the title! And the story itself of course. I've never taken Kyoko to be the sinical one and Ren to be the romantic in their relationship but this was really cute!

So unromantic, and brilliant. Loved it! I've never thought about it before, but it's true that Ren really is a sap about love, lol. This felt like a very feminist version of love, and I loved it. I read way too many stories of "ownership" and "melt at one touch" *gag* please - have some self respect for god's sake. (Which this fic definitely had, brilliant story!).
The only thing I would say, is consider putting a divider from when it jumps from her being 18 to 23. I did just have to pause a check "yes this is 5 years later", lol

Oh. Oh damn. This is... well I know this won't really ever be canon, because Skip Beat is a shoujo manga, but then again this is a fanfiction that is just so perfect. Kyoko's jaded attitude and ignorance, Ren's everything. The ending and how they have both matured. Thank you so much for this beautiful read.

Its awesome! i really liked it!

your story was good, but a lot OOC !
Like Kyoko not remembering who Kuu is !
Maybe you should put it in your summary, so people know :)

So... Kyoko wasn't in character at all. Or at least it didn't feel like it. Neither was Ren, really
But somehow, even though they weren't in character, the way you wrote the story and had it turn out... was beautiful anyways.
Really, really, beautiful.

The characters were definitely OOC and I won't read those type of fanfiction. However, your story interested me and I'm glad I read it.

It just seemed more realistic and relatable. It kind of saddens me that Kyoko isn't as straightforward and knowledgeable (for lack of a better word) in the manga as she is in your story. It pleased me how you described the other part of love into perspective and not just the part everyone is exposed to.

This was very well written and had great grammar. I like the way you told this story, how you didn't beat around the bush and just got straight to the point. I hate reading about useless details about trivial things in fanfiction or stories in general.

Anyways, this was a very nice and refreshing read. Good job! :)

:)