The ending was amazing. It was the best result that could have happened.. They together were too much, he who never lets any with more power live, she who could not control herself and knew the power she held. Sigh. IT was wonderful. You write sex scenes very well, and even mentioned aftercare which is a rare thing in fanfics. The torture scenes were superb and I loved how you would show the mindset behind them.

oh that would be an awful site to see lol

uh oh, the dark lord is going to rape her!

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wow i love this storie!

I read this all in the past 3 hours...wow.

A part of me was hoping for a happy ending, yet knowing it would be impossible for two beings of this nature to inhabit the same world.

So sad and twisted and at times I was horrified yet could not stop reading. Wow.

WOW.

Bravo.

beautiful! the perfect dark ending to a perfect dark story! THANX!

Um...I am very concerned for you...but I won't complain if you keep writing like this. You have really done a wonderful job with this story.

-Annie

if i could i would favorite this again lol this was such a great story! a shame tht it ended

BEAUTIFUL! I love it!

great chaptr! please continue!

...will he do it? o.o

aw tom is gonna lose his pet and billie is going to meet her end. well this is a tradegy. at least ther was great sex in it lol continue soon plz. i love this story!

Thank you for a great chapter! :)

yay i knew it! lol. i cant wait for more, i hate cliffhangers. i hope they stay together tho. i kno tom isnt one 4 love but he can get awfully possesive. continue soon plz!