| Reviews for Hinatachan's Konohagakure Christmas |
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Professor Donger chapter 5 . 5/12/2014 SEQUEL |
MissEternal chapter 5 . 7/25/2011 This story was one of the best Naruhina stories out there! Please keep up the great work! Now I'm on to your other Naruhina fanfictions if you have more~~ |
FrictionX42 chapter 5 . 4/21/2011 Aside from being rather quick, it was very sweet and I liked it. I really go for the WAFFy stuff and this hit the spot. The only other thing I could say about it is that it's all happiness and joy; lack of conflict can make for a story without a lot of realism. Sounds to me like you're fixing that soon, however. Can't wait. |
Uzumaki Ricky chapter 2 . 9/15/2010 THAT ROCKED! |
Uzumaki Ricky chapter 1 . 9/9/2010 NICE JOB! |
dragonball256 chapter 2 . 8/24/2010 Nice what an awesome chapter. Day one is a success :D |
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 Great start to this story. Can't wait to see Sakura's plan in action. Hopefully Hinata can actually do those things. |
BlackRoseDragon13 chapter 5 . 8/20/2010 I really liked this story - it was just the right balance of fluff and plot. You had me laughing and aw-ing at all the right moments :) It was a great read - I look forward to the sequal! Your writing style is easy to read and very enjoyable. Thanks again for posting such an awesome story :) |
ephemeralspring chapter 5 . 8/19/2010 Great story! GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STORIES! |
Rose Tiger chapter 5 . 8/19/2010 Good! Keep going! |
brawlerbro chapter 5 . 8/18/2010 GREAT ENDING! I AWAIT YOUR NEXT TALE! |
Nibinikwe chapter 4 . 8/16/2010 This story is awesome! I liked how you explored the different point of views while Hinata was passed out. It made it more interesting instead of just saying "Hinata became conscious twenty minutes later." or something along those lines. And the moody Kurenai made me laugh. I know how scary pregnant ladies can be... So, anyways... carry on... :D -Nibinokwe |
Rose Tiger chapter 4 . 8/14/2010 So cute! Keep going! |
ephemeralspring chapter 4 . 8/13/2010 Nice chapter! KEEP UPDATING! |
Suave Jiraiya chapter 3 . 8/10/2010 This was a great chapter. I really enjoyed the portrayal you gave Hiashi and didn't think it was too ooc at all. Hanabi's portrayal I also enjoyed and agree with you about it being a normal ten year old forced into the pomp and circumstance, as opposed to a prissy, stuck-up snob. I wish I had a good idea for you about the Christmas party. Maybe use the mistletoe as a focal point for all the characters at the party. I'm looking forward to reading about Naruto learning to dance from Kurenai. I just pray you've gotten creative with the Ice-Queen of Konoha and haven't stuck her with Asuma like we see in every other story on this site. Good luck with the next update. |