Reviews for The Unlucky One
Ryoko-nee chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Ahaha, cuuute! Nice little twist on Yellow's personality at the end-unexpected!
kachiru-chan chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
I loved this story. Even after I read it a year after it was written, I still love it. Kudos to you if you know APH. o
ReploidCat chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Soooo cute 'squeal'
Angered Wings chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Good read the characters stay in character I think. Btw Snowlight, I think in the manga Gold and Silver have been rivals for enough time that they have become friends I thinks that's what happened in the manga. check if you're not sure and update biweekly

Remember, I'll always be watching over you - Wings
Mysca chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
This is such a cute story xD

Silver was a bit too angry IMO xD Yellow and her innocence was just adorable xD And that last part...made me squeal xD

Hikari xD