Where do I find the sequel?!

Sooo.. I have read your story now.

And it's very well written. You're an amazing author.

BUT

Aniron is a Mary Sue of the WORST kind.

She goddamn boring to read about

and pretty much everything is ABOUT her.

Remember that Tolkien created a company of nine people and they all got a "share of the glory" which means that they all are refered to equally.

I mean..

Wouldn't we have been annoyed if Tolkien like Gimli more than alle the other characters and therefore practiacally only wrote about Gimli?

Yes we would.

I felt like this whole thing only revolved around Aniron.

And it was annoying.

I stopped reading after a couple of chapters because it was so annoying.

She perfect, Every male within miles around is in love with her, She is almost more beautiful than Galadriel (Which is not even possible) and she is ever resonable and rational. NOBODY and I repeat NOBODY can have a big gash in their shoulder AND a gash so deep that you can see the ribs and then simply walk around and feel fine after a couple of hours. Most people would take weeks even months to heal. and weeks to be able to stand again. even with our modern day technology. Simply unreal. And Saruman would not give a shit about her. He only cares for his own life. And so he tries to persuade Gandalf and Theoden. He wouldn't start snapping at a Lady like that while trying to persuade people out of killing him/locking him in a tower. Simply unreal again.

She is without debate a Mary Sue. Give me ONE flaw she has. ONE. I bet you can't. So. This story will need som serious changes.

OR future stories of yours will..

I realise that you probably won't really care about this review since this story is pretty old. I'm just writing to help you not make the same mistakes again.

Good job. I am enjoying it. However, one grammatical error I have noticed is that every new dialogue from a different person begins, so should a new paragraph. Otherwise, I have enjoyed it.

*sniff* that's so sad. Great story. Keep up the good work.

your story was great until now. im afraid that was a horrible way to end the story. not cool...

Eh! That's so not supposed to happen! ARe you going to write a sequel?

gag

utter and total garbage

...yuk a mary sue

Is that it? That can't be it! Your not allowed to write 18 chapters of hope and then have her die and not finish and not update for 6 months, it isn't fair.

;( sniffles and weeps uncontrolably! ;(

Noooooo, She can't die! NOOOOOOO! What about the little life she was endangering besides her own!

I hope you write more or make a sequal!

I don't think there are words that I can use to discribe how much I love this fic! This is sooooo good!

great so far..I've read many stories like this one, but this one may be better than the rest...

This is still for chapter 18, since I already reviewed...did it end, or not? Because I'm the only one who seems to be sad...hmm...this requires thought...Emma, u b wonderful writer. I had you and Moriah(sp?) confused earlier...veryveryvery good. Write more, pwetty pwease? See ya at the Hopeless!

Why'd ya have to make it so saaaaaaaaaaaaaad? sniffle, tear, snuff ::vainly wipes face:: Now there can't be a sequel! And...and...what bout the little mini-Legolas'? It's not faaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiir...sniffle, sniffle, snuff, tear, tear...

Wow! This is really good!