i fricking loved this! you are a very talented writer and you are very good at slash1

I LOVED the language in this piece. It really captured Arthur's emotions. And I liked how this could easily be seen as a prologue to their defining moment.

Nice job!

Sid

Ah! Lovely chapter! Is there more? Maybe? Possibly? Oh, well, good job and thanks for writing! :)

Oo, aces job. You did Inception and slash justice! There was an html error in the story, but otherwise everything looked nice and neat.

Hot damn. I love this. :D I am about to go off and read the sequel to this. :) I do love how you set this up. It really makes me want to read more.

:P arthur just needs to jump him. eames wouldn't mind

ah... now I can quite clearly say I'm a bit afraid of ideas... D:

But, it was good. SUPER GOOD! And it'd be super fantastical if you could totally add more to it. ;D

The thought of Arthur naked and tangled in sheets is so sexy! This fandom is so young that something that simple in writing makes me salivate ;P. I liked your piece, the writing is clear and the length seems just right for what you got across.

Thanks for taking the time to write it ;)

MMMM GURL. IS THIS A ONE SHOT OR IS THIS GONNA CONTINUE? :) I really really like this. Your writing flow is super smooth. Ever thought of putting this up on a livejournal fic community? :)

this is pretty good I must say )