So sweet, thanks for writing!

Es absolutamente perfecto, hermoso, divino y lo amo.
Está tan bien escrito, hiciste un excelente trabajo, me pongo de pie!:DDD

I love this! :)

Oh, this is really beautiful. I love the comparision and I love how you describe why they're perfect for each other, even though they may seem like complete opposites.
And the last two paragraphs... perfect.

Loved it! Is the opening referring to Eames or Cobb. I was imagining Cobb and it seemed to
fit but maybe you were talking about Eames?

I love this story. :) Well-written and very sweet.

Fantastic!
I think your writing style really flows and it's an easy read. As for the story- your take on the Arthur/Ariande pairing is different and works really well. No one ever talks about Eames and Cobb from Ariande's point of view, and looking at them by way of comparision is a great idea. Like practically everyone else who wrote a review: the last paragraph creates a lovely image.
Write more! I love your style :)

Good insights into the characters! Also, the piece flows logically from point to point

Loved this: "So when Ariadne casually slid her hand into his as they walked out of the airport, Arthur didn't react, but to knit his fingers more comfortably into hers. And Ariadne had the sneaky suspicion that he'd been planning this all along." Absolutely brilliant! XD

Great work! Thank you for the story :)

Very well-written. I can appreciate your take on Ariadne and Arthur's relationship; it is very different from the way that they are typically portrayed here. Well done.

Lovely interpretation of Ariadne and Arthur's attraction to one another. I like how you provided her views on Eames and Cobb as contrasts. Well done!

-Yana

Perfect. :)

Didn't quite see EamesAriadne at all the in movie realm, but your portrayal of this made sense. :)

Great interpretation of the characters, really fun read !

Bravo! This was amazing, especially because I thought you really went into detail and read in between the lines of her relationship with the characters. Never in a million years would've thought of this. Write more! x.x