| Reviews for Severed |
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Minnie1015 chapter 49 . 6/17 I never read unfinished stories...I hate the feeling of not knowing how things will end. But I read this one because of the reviews and I’m glad I did. You’ve obviously had loss in your life...there’s no way you could write this topic so poignantly without suffering through it yourself in some way. Thank you for sharing it with us...it was beautiful. I could feel all of their pain. I will follow this story in the long shot hope that you ever finish it...but even if you never do...please know that it’s touched me, just like I’m sure it’s touched others too. No other death story has been done as well as this one. Great job! |
alderfur chapter 23 . 6/4 i reread this every day. i don't know what it is about this story, but i keep coming back to break my heart all over again. |
alderfur chapter 22 . 6/3 i know i just reviewed but god this tears me to pieces every time. i cannot quite describe the absolute gut-wrenching perfection of this chapter. the line where mikey hangs on to give them "the last of his life" as a final act of his love is heart breaking. indescribably well-written, and brutal. thank you for writing this. it kills me to read it but it is so good i cannot help but reread it all the time. |
alderfur chapter 1 . 6/3 i reread this every once in a while. perhaps to torture myself. mainly, i reread it for the writing itself. the angst is always a bonus. but the words that you write down are strung together in such a realistic, gut-wrenching. i feel like eviscerating me would have hurt less. this is one of two fanfictions that has ever made me cry. today is the 10 year anniversary of my best friend's death. i know that i'll never get over her - as you had donnie put so well, that it's not a journey with a happy destination - i can only hope that one day you might return to this and add a bit more. even if not, losing mikey so quickly, so horrifically, is definitely enough to haunt me for life, and he's not real. sometimes i definitely wish they were. right now, tmnt sounds like a lot better place to be. |
Guest chapter 49 . 10/5/2018 Dayummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Words cannot express how broke I am 7_7 |
Guest chapter 49 . 9/9/2018 Even though everything is already depressing...I'm still hoping Mikey would just... come back alive again. I know it's stupid but I don't want to assume that he's dead cuz ya know...the-fic-isn't-done-so-you-won't-know-if-somebody-is-rlly-dead-even-though-they-just-died... So uh... I still have my faith |
Guest chapter 25 . 9/8/2018 I've never cried while reading fanfics or pocket books or whatevs until now.. I dunno I just feel very sad when reading dramas but I'M CRYING RN! As a very judgemental person I can say you're very good at this. You should make a book or somethin' :-) |
Guest chapter 49 . 6/16/2018 Jesus Christ Leo, you could have asked for help. |
Raigon chapter 49 . 6/11/2018 Wow, big brother Leo ...go. |
Who am I. I'm the Void chapter 49 . 6/8/2018 Shit even I forgot the place was a mess... good thinking Leo but daaaaaaaamn! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/14/2017 I'll try to read this more at a later date but I can't go any further than this tonight. I lost my little sister last October and she was our little jokester and the source of so much joy in our family. This is hitting a little close to home for me. |
Silexwitch chapter 47 . 8/14/2017 Oh, there needed to be a warning not safe for work. Totally bawed my eyes out, in at work and my makeup is all ruined. |
Raigon chapter 47 . 8/13/2017 So sad, but I am so glad you are continuing things. I am still hoping somehow ...they managed to bring Mikey back. |
Jaddis chapter 46 . 7/20/2017 Why is this in my favorites again? So depressing, but in a good way. Well, not for the turtles. |
Joanne N. Grey chapter 45 . 6/18/2017 I'm with you there Leo. Why did April hit you? I guess I have to wait for a little while to find out. Thanks for updating. |