This was pretty good. It's almost as fluffy as Body Breaker. Although, I personally think you should have included the wedding, but that's just me. Good luck with Monster Digitized.

don't you think you could have written about the wedding in the 4th chapture or in a fifth?

I'm so sad that this is over, but it turned out really great. I always get so sad whenever I watch the scene where Mocchi loses to Most and you wrote it out so well. Also the part where Durahan/Moo picks up Holly's father always makes me cringe since it's so depressing seeing Holly crying in the background. I really like how you wrote that scene out. I was also very happy to see Holly's father was okay with Genki and Holly's engagment. It's so sweet! You did a very nice job closing this story and I can't wait to read more of your work. _

nice job with this you keep up the good work and i wish you luck with your other stories/chapters.

Eeeep! I'm so glad to see the rebels all back together again! It was so cute seeing Genki and Holly trying to explain marriage and where babies come from to Mocchi. It's one of those delicate topics that are hard to explain to a young person, let alone a monster. I really loved the part where Suezo was trying to get Holly to talk about the ring without actually asking her. Him giving her his blessings was so wonderful. It made me want to hug him. _ I think it was a really sweet suggestion of Genki's to wait until Holly's father was released before they get married. It was so noble of him. I can't wait for the last chapter! It'll be very bitter sweet since I want to see what'll happen, but I also don't want this story to end. . Keep up the great work!

Nice job with those two up the good work!

Awwww! Genki is such a romantic! He's so good to Holly. After reading the description of the ring he gave her, I really love it! I'm jealous. _ I wish Genki would have fought for money in the show. He would have kicked butt. I also thought it was a great twist to have Tiger be the first one found. Most people would take the obvious choice of Mocchi being found first, so I think that was a really nice choice on your part. Mocchi wouldn't understand Holly and Genki's relationship on the same level that Tiger does, so I think that will be a really nice addition. I'm a little nervous about how Suezo will act, though! I hope he approves! Great chapter! I'm going to be sad when this is finished.

Please update sooner!

Another story from ripitupgenki? Hell to the yeah! _

I love where this is going! It has the season 3 plot as a backdrop, but it mainly focuses on how Holly and Genki interact and deal with inner turmoil.

If I could find that Black Dino Captain that touched Holly, I'd beat it into the ground! _ I like the CPR part, though! It was very accurate (I'm trained in CPR) and it really brought out some fear in Genki. It was very well written.

I'm still envious of your ability to write kissing scenes. Seriously, I need to steal some of your 'awesome ability to write kissing scenes' power. I like how you make Genki so modest, too. It's so sweet!

I really hope you keep up on this story! This has a ton of great potential and I can't wait to read more! _~