i wish there's a picture of her dressing... i dunno how to imagine her dress. just know that she is incredibly sexy and naked lol...

Well, I have only read the first chapter and I do not think I am going to continue.
But since you seem to be keen on getting reviews, I thought it would be better to leave you one than to just shake my head and leave.

This story might have potential, but you manage to show the main character is dumb and lacks all ability to reflect within the first two paragraphs. That is just sad.
How much of an idiot has a 20(!) year old to be to not even be able to recognize their own siblings as three dimensional characters. The description of Iris shows within seconds that Evangeline is not even remotely clever and does not understand anything about looking deeper than the surface. I am sure you wanted her to be an intelligent, multi layered, compassionate and deep character, but there is no way anyone is going to believe that if she cannot even find empathy in herself for her own siblings.

This is still my favourite fanfiction. I always keep returning back to it hoping you would upload. I wish it happens.

Thanks for everything this fanfiction was, could have been, and always will be. Eight years later and I'm still in love with Evan, and I can't find a writer who nails Tom like you.

I really enjoyed reading your story but I was wondering whether it was abandoned or not since the last update was ages ago.

No offense, but Evan is acting kinda skinky.

I'M SO SAD THAT THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER, PLEASE GIVE SOME SORT OF INDICTION YOU ARE ALIVE HOOMAN

I am screaming internally in my call!

im just wow, I cant even, omg, I can't even BREATHE

I have hope that one day You will come back!

wow... i'm one of those reader who can wait... BUT THIS? oh god... please update soon! I'm gonna take crucio for this! please update sooooooooonnnnn...

I finished your story and I love it!
Great job with creating a believable character,
very great,
looking forward to your next update!
beachchick3

Please update soon! This is one of the best Riddle x Oc stories I've read so far. Cant wait to see what happens next

Great story! Update soon!

This story had me laughing out loud for almost every single chapter. The way you write Riddle is fantastic, and your original characters are absolutely brilliant.
Despite the odd typo, your balance between comedy and drama makes reading this story all the more enjoyable. I do hope you continue to write it, as I (and I'm sure many others) are still excited to see how this turns out. Seriously, Evan's bluntness is goals.