Well done. Asides from some minor medical mistakes but, asides from that, good piece. Thanks so much for sharing.

The story's great! Problably the best Carson-centered one I've seen so far. Well-written, gripping, kept in character, original yet highly 'canon' in feeling. Those are not easy to find. Thank you!

Fantastic fic. I've often thought about what Carson went through during his captivity with Michael, and this story told that wonderfully! :)

Great work!

Very interesting and fun story.

I really enjoyed this, and I have read the story the other reviewer was talking about and they're not that similar to make me think any ideas were ripped off. Similar plot bunnies, yes, but aftermath of Misbegotten was a popular one at the time (I even had a story years ago that was similar, never posted though). So don't worry about it too much.

Also you have a tensancy to switch POV's without much warning. It can get confusing.

But again, I enjoyed the story a lot. :)

:D Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story of yours. Really liked it. Loved the bit about Rodney's middle name and how Rodney "volunteered" to help Carson type his report. Hope to see more from you in the future! :) Keep up the great work and take care.

:( I'm guessing what Michael took was what he needed to make a clone of Carson...

Poor Carson. I hope he finds the answers he's looking for.

Loved the story very much and hope you will write more Carson fics very soon :)

Great story, though it reminds me very much of 'Repercussions', a story that the author unfortunately didn't finish. You should've asked her if you could take her story over, (that would've been great, to finally get that story continued!) rather than taking most of her ideas.

Also, you have a bad habit of confusing us as to who spoke. For instance:

"Teyla." Carson nodded. "Look," John continued. "We're not even sure he got off the planet."

It looks like Carson is the one who said, 'Teyla'. You need to do it like this:

"Teyla."

Carson nodded.

"Look," John continued. "We're not even sure he got off the planet."

I'm really enjoying this story so far. It's awesome the way you delve into Sheppard's head and Carson's. I'm enjoying everyone's interactions and it's just a really great story overall. I can't wait to see where it goes.

Great job with this story so far. I really enjoying it. Thanks for sharing.

Liked the chapter and still really like your story. I am still reading, just been a bit lazy about about writing reviews and a combination of having no internet some days. Anyways, absolutely loved Carson and Rodney's short conversation about their names :D Very very curious to see what happens next and very glad there's going to be at least two more chapters!

Just had the time to catch up with your story and wow still love the Carson whump ;)

Hope John and Hightmeyer can help Carson to remmeber :)

more soon please

Oh another really great chapter :)

poor Carson you just want to hug him and get him all better ;)