I like this fanfic:)

want more please )

So far you've got a nice light comedy going on here and it's as good as say "You've got Mail"!

Let see more when your more focused!

Dennisud

Liking it so far. Keep updating!

Okay.

okay chapter.

lol

Nice.

lol...I am not sure about Ron/Gabrielle but I guess with Ron's veela weakness and him being famous along with Fluer/Bill it makes sense.

Honestly, It was kind of ... like a ... filler. It was not your best chapter certainly not as good as last chapters.

But don't be disappointed. I think you should know where are your flaws, so you could remove them.

Now when I say that it was not good, it didn't mean that it was not well written, I just meant that there was nothing ... now what should I call it ... special ? I mean your chapters have a unique sense of humor in them but it was just a plain-forward chapter.

I hope next one will be more interesting then this one. Till then Goodbye &

! BEst of luCK !

Great update. Love Sirius! Can't wait to see what Hermiones plan is.

continue

harry is confused and scared. it's expected but he'll soon get over it

Great chp. Good character development. Please update again soon.

Good chapter! I can't help wondering what will happen next. Personally, I think it'd be entertaining if Hermione realized Harry has feelings for her, or is told as much by Sirius, and sets about getting him. Perhaps getting a few days/weeks alone with him and wearing progressively more revealing clothing or just trying to seduce him. lol