beautiful!

That was so sweet... Please continue writing. Possibly continue writing this. It is AMAZING. I mighty even use the word epic, which I only use to describe myself. (jk)

Must... Add... To... Favourites... Immediately!

Chocolate

Is what Fang smells like.

Ahhh that's my favorite. Its killed me. haha :D

This is simply adorable. Seriously, well done. _

I grinned a bit when it said that Fang smelled like chocolate. He seems a bit too...manly for that, to be honest. xD Although chocolate totally pwns man-stench.

The only CC I have to mention is the use of underlining words for emphasis. Italics works perfectly fine and is the generally accepted form, so rather stick to that.

My favourite has to be the last and second last one. Both very cute.

Much love,

-Tokoloshe

Stills that feeling deep inside that makes you want to cry, but leaves you all quiet and trembling in respect.

There is nothing I can say. This is so awesome words don't begin to describe it. Hilarious, angsty (just a little), purposeful... completely awesome. That is all. Please, please keep writing stories like this.

That was so cool! I really liked that. :)

That... was GREAT! I've never read anything like this (but if I did and just don't remember... that's normal) and I REALLY thought it was cool!

that was so GOOD no not good AWEOME i loved it i will read some of ur stories if they r that good

That was a great ending, worthy of any good film or book.

It's...ahmazing.

Two comments, though.

You used "Chocolate" twice and can I use the words for an SG version of this?

Sylver

*claps* Amazing. *looks around**claps some more**huggles Juliet**never lets go*

Wow..amazing.