| Reviews for The Morning Sun |
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Cerucci chapter 20 . 7/19 This is really amazing. I'm saddened to see its been so long since it was updated but I love this story too much not to leave a review. I hope one day you can come back to it. |
Mushishixxxholic chapter 20 . 6/8 Love it |
Isult chapter 20 . 4/11 Still hope you're gonna finish it one day :) |
Guest chapter 20 . 4/9 Please keep writing this amazing story. I absolutely love it and I want to know what happens to Jake and Tsu'Tey. |
Wolvie26 chapter 20 . 12/10/2019 Love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you update soon! |
Nadiafarjana chapter 20 . 10/20/2019 Really loved the story..it was so beautiful and peaceful |
E.KATHERINE chapter 20 . 9/6/2019 I know that this was made in 2012 but I really want to see what happens. You might not see this but oh well XD |
Lea chapter 20 . 7/21/2019 still waiting :) really hope you'll continue some day |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/2/2019 Oh wow! I know I’m years late to this story but I recently rewatched Avatar and had to see this! (God, I wish the sequel was out already!) Lovely story, though I wish you continued. |
Guest chapter 20 . 6/21/2019 please update! |
me chapter 20 . 3/1/2019 I know it's been 7 years. You might not comeback, but I will wait :) |
Zoossssssss chapter 20 . 11/13/2018 Oh my gosh! This is so good I can't even! I love how this story is going it gives me the happy feelings! |
Yadi chapter 20 . 8/10/2018 I’m loving this story sooo much! Hope you get the muse back, even though it has passed a lot of years! I thing the next chapter would be the mating scene...? (Hoping it is!) Your writing is amazing and the plot makes a lot of sense. I wish you could continue it. You said in the first chapter that Mo’at died in the movie? I thought that the one who died was Eytukan... Mo’at lived. Or maybe there is a book I don’t know about... (if so, I would search for it. But I never heard of it) Oh well, it doesn’t matter. If that’s what it takes for you to write this story like it has been imagined then I can’t complain about it. It’s your story and plot, and you should write it however you want it. And I still stand about what I said in that last sentence, but I would like to make a suggestion (if you still want to do it as you have been doing it it’s fine, just bringing it so the readers don’t keep clomplain about this). I think instead of putting the meaning of the Na’vi sentences or words at the bottom of every chapter, why not putting them in parentheses after you have writen what you wanted to say in na’vi. I have read some stories like that and no one was complaining about it in the comments. And it’s much more easier for the readers not expert in that language, like you seem to be (for one I would like to learn it, this stories has sparked an interest for it). Like I said before, is just a suggestion, if you want to use it or not is up to you. Keep up the awesomeness coming and updates too! XD -Yadi _ *.* |
Guest chapter 20 . 5/23/2018 A very beautiful story so far. I absolutely love the way it's going and look forward to reading more. *throws cooshy pillows in no certain direction and leaves a giant basket of goodies for the writer* |
Anno1701 chapter 20 . 3/30/2018 This is a great story and it's so sad that you didn't continue this! |