I have to say everyone is so out of character it isn't even funny... Sesshomaru waving, InuYasha saying thank you and being kind, kikyho being loving when she wouldn't accept InuYasha as a hanyou unless he turned into a human... let alone the fact that she is dead and had no real body to come back to.. she was a clay doll... much like a porcelain doll you would buy... at least you have rinny age the right age... or at least close to it..

kikyho never once in all the anime said I love you to InuYasha it was always do you love me InuYasha... the doll was dead and should have been put back in the grave or given her proper age of oh I don't know... lets see 18 at age of death 50 years in the graves 4 since this all started? 72 years old... age her to her rightful age and put the character to the way they should be... Sesshomaru would have nodded or more like just 'hn'd'

InuYasha and kikyho just make me want to puke...

since Kagome is the miko and kikyho isn't well then Kagome should be wearing the garb while kikyho wears a kimono... why did you fdress Kagome not her station... she looks foolish... she can't even walk right let alone being able to dress herself... watch youtube to understand kimono

Pues si este final es un poco sosorro espero que lo cambies aunque despues de siete

años lo mismo ni te acuerdas

Cristina Pacheco

More more more please please please

I love this story. Please make a sequel!

I like it. The flow is good and it is easy to read. Keep up the good work! :)

Even though I just started reading this story I think its great. Chapter two even made me tear up at how noble you made Inuyasha as opposed to making him a total ass like everyone else. I just had to add this story to my faves. I know I will end up reading it repeatedly. Keep up the good work.

Please do a chapter on the wedding!

Really nice story... specially for those who want a simple and a little fast-paced(not dragging) kind of story, it was really good and Im looking forward to a sequel!

I thought it was wonderful just a couple things Rin her character does know how to speak properly. The objects like the dinning table and chairs and Sesshomaru working on paper's for that time, a little unbelievable I loved the story have you drawn any pictures if you have will you email me them :DD "thumbs up"

Most of the story was pretty good, a little chaste but good. My only complaint was the ending, it seemed too abrupt to me and it left me a bit dissatisfied.

This story is going along quite well leaving me hungering for more! Will review again when I get further. _

i think that i may have died reading that last part :O

Not that i mind the really slow updates but you got to hurry and write a sequel. I have been waiting without complaint but this is just unbareable. PLEASE update soon.

AGAIN PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRTIE A SEQUEL!