| Reviews for Best Friends Forever, Almost |
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  Ambersky chapter 22 . 3/25 Beautiful story! I love it so far! |
 SavvySpirit chapter 22 . 3/11 Umm...What happens to the kits? Do they find out? |
| Lainey.S.M chapter 1 . 10/31/2019 Wow! Love the story! |
| RavenstrikeKitty chapter 1 . 7/5/2019 I've only read a little bit, but I can tell that this story is going to be amazing! the only issue is that Hollyleaf and Breezepelt are half-siblings. it isn't to bad though, considering the amount of incest there is in the original series' XD I've just learned to pretend they aren't related at all. Anyway, so far this story is definitely one of my favorites. Keep up the good work! |
| Da unikitty chapter 2 . 6/23/2019 Bootifuul:3 |
| the twilight phoenix chapter 21 . 12/18/2018 do nightkit |
| the twilight phoenix chapter 20 . 12/18/2018 oH nO incEST |
| oof chapter 22 . 1/19/2018 holly x breeze is my otp, but i thought you’d at least make it an au where brambleclaw and squirrelflight are hollyleaf’s parents.. now it’s just incest |
| Guest chapter 22 . 10/24/2017 HollyPaw: NOOOO! WHY MUST IT GET CLOSER TO THE END! DeadPaw: Rip HollyPaw's happiness and drama ?-2017 lmao HollyPaw: -_- FrozenPaw: I started a game show! It's called Win A Date With HollyPaw! HollyPaw: WAIT WHAT?! ME?! Ok then :D AmberPaw: I CALL THE CAMERA WOMAN! DeadPaw: Uh... I'll be the special effects! :3 FrozenPaw: I'll be the announcer and tally marker! HollyPaw: I'll be the person who dates all these random maybe even stupid toms! |
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/24/2017 HollyPaw (my OC): WHAT THE FRICK?! I MAY HAVE KILLED BERRYNOSE BUT SERIOUSLY BREEZEPAW?! YOU COULD'VE KISSED HER! DeadPaw: Calm down sis -.- FrozenPaw: SCREEEEEEE WHY DIDN'T THEY KISS?! AmberPaw: You guys do know it's just a book right? FrozenPaw and HollyPaw: WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?! DeadPaw: CRAP! COME ON AMBERPAW HIDE IN THE SHELTER! |
| Person chapter 22 . 7/1/2017 Please make more soon! Its awesome and I don't want it to end now! |
| None chapter 22 . 1/28/2017 I'm so excited to see what will happen next! I have to say, about halfway through the story, just as I was getting used to the idea of Hollyleaf and Breezepelt being together, I remembered they were half-siblings. At first, I almost stopped reading the story simply in the hopes that the couple would break up. However, the reason I continued reading was because the story intrigued me. After all, I've never read any sort of story about siblings being in love with each other. I feel bad for Holly- and Breeze-, but because of how well-written this piece is, this ship has become one of my favorites! Great fanfic - can't wait to see more from you! |
| 100fluffykittens chapter 22 . 12/17/2016 you fucking stopped! |
| 100fluffykittens chapter 21 . 12/17/2016 i like 2 kits but maybe one dies as a apprentice? or even kit. the other kit might be called: Flamefoot? - ginger tom with amber eyes Mapleshine - light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes (like leafpool) Heathertuft - dark grey(almost black) she-cat with blue/green eyes(most unlikely cuz breezepelt doesn't want to think of heathertail) |
| 100fluffykittens chapter 16 . 12/17/2016 PLZ don't! |
