Amazing story. Thank you for sharing this with us

Well what can i say this story was and is a pure perfection to dark anxiety fun like me you are one of the rare writers here who took Chuck real to the gutter and put him out with help of Sarah in both ways wish that was more story's like this well done i really wow you for your effort here to bad you not write more or i cant find more this kind of stories.

As i writing this sentence i am still not finished the chapter but when Casey pull others to Sarah and Chuck and reading Chuck behavior he got me resemble of evil Igor waiting for his prey and Casey as dr Frankenstein cherry on cake was his remark of "beauty sleep" that really crack me up. Ok Shaw is also intersect in and still got captured not bloody likely but it is what it is for this story. And best for the final of the chapter like i always want it to Sarah finished the job to remain her sanity and for Chucks also but for her to feel what Chuck was feeling all this years its a glimpse but now she can fully understand consequences of her action and now Chuck loosing it was the ultimate so called punishment but that wouldn't be fair for both of them well done.

Well its obvious even to a idiot she is Chucks poison and cure in the same bottle and like i said maybe is better for both of them that she finished the job because maybe even her not be strong enough to pull him back to sanity even if he kills Shaw maybe he crossed the line with no coming back except to looneywill.

Well she at least could finish the job because she is the main reason of Chuck state of mind i just hope he can recover from this nightmare and go on of his life maybe even better without her.

Well i am the last one who would gonna stay between him and his revenge of his lost family but if Sarah heard it all somehow her penance would be that she wack Shaw with one screaming death or just let the ma to his duty with same effect.

Girl you have no idea what you done to him and premise "what it would be like if it were" its lame from her mouth so dont bother and just try to understand what your behavior and action done to the man.

WOW just bloody f**king wow this chapter is holy grail for dark anxiety fan like me you really got the nerve Sarah who ran away death of a sister and Devon Chuck goes bananas and all of that because she left cant wait to continue.

This version of Chuck is a lot different and I really enjoyed it. I always love seeing how different people can take the story of Chuck and seeing him so upset and have real spy behavior is cool. I think you did a good job portraying how dark his thoughts got but also paralleling it with the true character that he couldn't deny in Sarah's presence. Great job!

Great little story. Stephen and Chuck at the end is a nice touch. I like it.

I kinda hope that the Sarah in your story doesn't get Chuck back

Yeah, once Sarah became a Shaw skank if I were Chuck I would of never taken her back.

After all Sarah's done I don't know if she deserves any kind of forgivness

Very heavy chapter but I sorta wish Chuck had shot him in the head. I suppose Chuck would be irredeemable then though at this point his hands are as bloody as Sarah's.

Your description of broken Chuck makes Shaw almost a sympathetic character.