Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

Khorne smiles and nods in respect.

Interesting premise, but I’ve seen similar in published a Bolo short story. Now that I have seen your stories I will have to read more to see if I like any of the rest.

Cool

This would make a great animated short.

No ! Bad Bolo's DO NOT self destruct !

To those complaining about the Bolo not killing the titan with its guns, keep in mind that Warhammer 40K warships use hundreds of fusion bolts as part of their weapons batteries, each dealing dozens of megatons. A mark 33 Bolo's hellbores each deal roughly eight megatons. Bolos use fission bolts I think, which are far weaker than similarly sized fusion bolts. The weapons of an Imperator Titan (the only Titan that would "tower" over a Bolo) are each larger than one of the main turrets of a mark 33 Bolo.

Basically, yeah, an Imperator Titan would have a good chance of defeating a Bolo. Especially since battle screens are weak to individual, excessively powerful strikes, which Titans are very good at delivering. Of course, void shields are weak to rapid strikes, which hellbores are good at, but those hellbores deliver much less damage per-shot than a Titan's void shields are designed to withstand. Let alone the adamantium which can take hits from anti-matter (Necrons).

Most importantly, though, remember that it is a CHAOS TITAN. Chaos doesn't have to follow logic. It could make a sheet of paper become capable of withstanding a supernova. Imagine how much warp energy is empowering that thing! There is a reason why Chaos forces, despite being horribly outnumbered by the Imperium, still manage to break even with them.

Besides, the Bolo won with an epic bang, so respect its valorous sacrifice and feel pride in humanity and in being human!

write more of these man.

You should not have joined if you can't take a joke ...

Nice on-shot.

Yeah i sorta agree with the caps overkill dude down there xD

Sill its a good job, getting that feel for the bolo personality, something in which authors (not only fanfic writers, but the big ones too) use to utterly fail...

good one-shot

OH COME ON A BOLO EVEN IN THE 2OS COULD KILL THIS TITAN FROM WAY OUT SIDE IS RANGE IF NEED BE AND THE THING IS A WALKER, A BLOODY WALKER HAS LITTLE SPEED TO THE BOLOS AND I THINK ONE GOOD SHOT WOULD NOCK IT ON ITS BACK, SO GET REAL THE ONLY THING THAT CAN FIGHT A BOLO 1ON1 IS A BIGGER BOLO

Almost poetry. Very well done.

niceness to the nth power

Beautiful.