Oh wow...that was so beautiful...that was...really amazing. Breathtaking descriptions. I love this couple and the way you portrayed their innocence. It really touched me deeply

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Wow! I wish I had that much grammar in stock! You were right though. A little OOC, but it made perfect sense for the most part. Awesome job. I love this :)

this is a beautifully serious take on the Lambo/I-Pin relationship. good job.

its sweet, its beautiful, its short and simple,its so... so... beautiful... job well done!

This is beautifully rich. The descriptions, whether they relate to I-Pin and Lambo or not, all contribute to a vivid image that makes their relationship feel equally vivid and full of depth and history. The history and parallel stories is what makes this pairing great, and this really captured that. And I love the images of their slightly younger versions on skateboards, and getting chased by Hibari (he SO would).