| Reviews for Waiting in Sin |
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   camp1500 chapter 12 . 11/7/2019 This was a very enjoyable read ... thanks . |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 10/23/2019 I noped out out of this when he joined the quidditch team. Why are you wasting our time if you aren't actually going to change anything? Oh boy, I wonder what happens in year 2. Could it be everything goes exactly like I remember and nothing different happens? That sounds so fun! To be completely honest though I didn't fully believe Ulquiorra's narration voice. It's not reacting or talking like it should and that kind of spoils the fun of a "Ulquiorra is Harry" story. Because what you've written isn't actually Ulquiorra. It's a poorly written version of him sure, but you haven't sold it well enough for it to actually be worth me pretending like they're one and the same. They are reacting too differently. Like thinking Malfoy is a prick for example... you thought that was a good thing to write why? |
| Kipplee chapter 3 . 7/24/2019 This is bad, like, really really bad. You constantly misspell words, have two people talk in the same paragraph, making it a right old mess to read. You don't even follow by your own story premise! The idea of this story is "Harry is Ulquiurra". Let me tell you and plant other readers right now. You have failed in that regard. He doesn't look like Ulquiurra He doesn't sound like Ulquiurra He doesn't talk like Ulquiurra He doesn't feel like Ulquiurra He doesn't act like Ulquiurra He doesn't think like Ulquiurra He doesn't have his powers He doesn't even have his temperament Oh yeah! he speaks Spanish! Whoopty. Fucking. Do |
| Stormshadow13 chapter 11 . 6/21/2019 Awesome story. Loved it. |
| Cats are my World chapter 5 . 6/21/2019 I really adore this; however, one thing does have me confused: you keep on referring to the spiders 'pincers'. I think you are mistaking either the spinnerets, pedipalps, tarsal claws or fangs for pincers as spiders do not possess pincers. |
| Setsuna Eien chapter 1 . 3/25/2019 I've read this story at least 4 times and I'e always loved it. Thank you for posting this. |
| TheFullmetalSociopath chapter 12 . 3/18/2019 I think I love you... this is so beautiful... I don't think any other fanfiction I read will ever measure up to this... |
| Icedev chapter 11 . 11/20/2018 I believe this is one of my favourite stories I have read period. |
| I'm not ofreakingkay chapter 1 . 10/21/2018 This stuff is hilarious! |
| Ahmed Maged chapter 2 . 9/15/2018 wtf is this shit? |
| Anaelyssa chapter 11 . 8/17/2018 I'm glad. Great story. |
| Anaelyssa chapter 10 . 8/17/2018 Luna is wonderful. Lovely battle. |
| Anaelyssa chapter 9 . 8/17/2018 So cute! Time travel. Cool. |
| Anaelyssa chapter 8 . 8/17/2018 Cool. Hime! Soul society is stupid. |
| Anaelyssa chapter 7 . 8/17/2018 Damn what a cliffhanger (good thing I'm reading this when it's finished.) Oh. Kaien... |
