TOO CUTE! I wish there was more I could say, but it was just too cute!

Cute. But I have a HUGE problem with the point of view switch. You started in third person, jumped to first, then suddenly you were back in third person again. Try proofreading next time :)

Sweet. PS - didn't read 'What Ifs' as don't want to read about death of a major character.

It's very cute but you changed point-of-view halfway through the story. You went from third person to first halfway through. Just thought I'd point that out to you in case you wanted to fix it. :) Loved it though. :) Aquarius Seth