Great job please continue

shame you havent continued it was pretty good

its a good start whens update?

give us more please!

So what happened in Konaha?

your story is wow! just, wow! i love the plot line :) and him pretending he is a servent, its so unique and completely original! i dont see that often :) only thing that MIGHT! might! be done is to add some moments of servant and master in it. you cant see really how they work.

Charybdis was a woman(i only know that from looking at google right now) so why make that Narutos new name?

Alright, you say this’ll become a long fic. I’ll keep you to that. This fic has a HUGE amount of potential, and I’d love to see it completed. Perhaps you could speed up this update rate of yours. One chapter every forever seems a bit too slow, don’t you think?

You seriously need to think up a new nickname for Naruto. ‘Biddy’ means a rambling, talkative old woman in English. Are you trying to imply that Naruto’s gonna have a sex change, suddenly grow old, and become annoyingly talkative?

Hm, Naruto can’t get his energy out of his body? I wonder if this has something to do with those bandages. They seal up his energy, so doesn’t that mean they stop it from going out of his body? Is it that when he removes some of them, he can externalize chakra at the spot he removes the bandages?

If Naruto’s missing eye has a doujutsu, would you consider letting Naruto awaken the doujutsu in his other eye as well? Having a doujutsu only in one eye doesn’t look as awesome as doujutsu in both eyes.

Even if it was a small update, at least you updated. So thanks for the update, keep it up, update soon!

Most impressive. I really appreciate this chapter.

I understand your pain when it comes to testing, having done them all.

Great writing. Keep at it!

interesting story u have, the spelling and grammar was pretty good.

Ah, I almost forgot this one, Glad to know you're still around. Thanks for the update.

I like the twist in this story. Though I am not fond of the concept of making the hero a god and someone who can't be hurt you have kept it realistic. I will be waiting to see where you take this. I can't wait to see what relationships you bring to this story and how you make your characters adapt to it.

Nice story with evening out the benefits with consequences done right. I look forward to the next chapter.

awwww only 7 years he aint gunna kill kyuubi so yea w.e since he knows he only got 7 he can do wat ever the fuck he wants dam shoulda at least give him 10 he gotta get strong and thats gunna take a while ...then open a can of whoop ass on konoha and every1 that stands on his way. Kinda sucks though since sarutobi already got every1 that hurt naruto so in the end naruto left for no reason well to get stronger but still? what he guna do wen he comes back kill those that glare at him? he cant hate konoha as a whole since he has the hokage anko and teuchi and ayame who care for him and what not. Also wtf who was the lil girl watchin naruto during the first 2 chapter i thought it was hinata but then cha wrote sumthin to make me think differently was it nari-chan? But then if it was how did she not know what happened to naruto? o.O

ahahah this is pretty good lulz dangit only one more chapter is out i wants more T.T waazap with kyu and naruto? wen did this happen? XD dangit naruto isnt goin back to konoha fuck at least go tell anko u alive u told her u'd never die