Amazing! Update soon:)

Love it!:)

thats a cool idea, the charcter from the goonies:) Cool, really good story:)

I loved this chapter! I can't wait for more! Plleeeeassse put up a new chapter soon!

I was giving this story a try and give this a nice little review, but you completely lost me at:

I knew Chris was being hurt by my father but I never expected it to be full on beatings from him. I had never really been around for the punches, dad made sure me and mom were out of the house before he got rid of all his anger. However, today I wasn't expected for another hour and my mom was meant to be grocery shopping. But I knew from the muffled cries, my mom was hiding from dad in the hallway closet, crying out her woes for Chris.

I couldn't stand to hear the cries of my best friend so I ran before I had a chance to cry.

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SO I RAN. WTF? 'Cause she can't do anything about it? She can't tell him something? Anything? I'm disappointed to say the least. :/

TOLD YOU ID REVIEW! Ahh you've been saying you've needed to udate this for ages, and you have! Write more! Cause i love this story :')

Right, what do i get for reviewing? Michael, my little buddy i told you about? Cause he's bloody adorable and i miss him already!

It's good so far. I am glad that you haven't over-done it with the Cobras because they are like, what 20 now? And they really don't want to be bothered with 14 year old's. I congratulate you. (:

Update soon though.

-Emma

Dude, your story just keeps getting better and better! I love it! I think my writer's block might be disappearing, yaaay! Also, i spotted the Goonies reference mehe. Anyways, update soon!

Yours faithfully,

Edgar Frog your brother. :-)

MR THE BEEF! Mwaha, duuude that's excellent *air guitar*! Your story is great by the way. Keep writing!

Yours faithfully

Edgar Frog, your brother.

:D

UPDATE!

love it!

I actually like this hopefully you'll update soon?

I have an Eyeball story up you can feel free to read it :)

Clara

Cute :D I hope you continue

Ok dude, so I am loving your story. And thanks for the shout out, ima do one for you, when i can write my next chapter -_-".

Yours faithfully Edgar Frog your brother :-)

Dude, that's excellent *air guitar* :-)

Mehe, too much love for Teddy.

Cant wait to read the next chapter, and the next, and the next ;-)

Stealing your idea here-

Yours faithfully Edgar Frog your brother

:-)