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Ahhhhh I loved this one! Nice to see the brave, tough members of International Rescue behave like kids at a slumber party, especially Scott. Poor Alan, this is literally me when it comes to any game that isn't Mario Kart. But then again, I'm not a professional racing driver so y'know...
I can totally relate to Scott as well, that feeling when you used to be able to beat your younger sibling at pretty much any game and then all of a sudden they know all the cheats and are thrashing you. It is a BITTER REALISATION I tell you! And as usual, Gordon had me laughing - when does he fail to brighten my day?

I thought I'd drop by to tell you just how much I loved this and how much it made me chuckle... In fact, I've been reading several of your Thunderbirds stories, and it's another fandom that you really seem to master! ;)

now this made me laugh the whole way through lol. kinda cheered me up to

well done you xx

the way you portray the brothers is brilliant - this is why Gordon is my fave, makes me laugh so much

Lol (do I say that too much?) Anyway, that was really funny! I can think of a few more thongs Alan might have lost at some point ...

lol Nice. Very funny.

Awesome job!

This is just to sweet! A perfect little mood lifter! Thanks for sharing it.

great story didnt stop laughin

I thoroughly enjoyed that! I love to see the boys enjoying themselves. Well written and very entertaining.

Aww! I loved it! And the end was so sweet! Of course papa Tracy would know what really happened!

Sigh...boys and their videogames. Very creative having Alan lose. I was cracking up when he threw the controller down and pouted.

I was laughing HYSTERICALLY though when Gordon announced to their dad that Alan had lost his virginity. That was hilarious!

Great story! I loved reading it! Thanks for writing it!

HA HA HA yes, I totally "lol'd!"

I loved the banter. And I really love that you pulled in Alan's history of racing. Poor Alan, everyone hates on him. But the more hating really means more love. He's just so easy to torture!

May favorite part: "What'd Alan lose?"

- "The Plot"

- "His Mind"

- "His Virginity"

... I'm gonna go ahead and guess that Gordon was the one who gave the virginity line. I freaking LOVE Gordon!

Thank you for this one-shot!

xo Malia xo

Well done, Loopstagirl. Your little story was a great pick-me-up. Wonderful and very funny characterizations of the Tracys and Kyrano.

Looking forward to what you come up with next.

This was great! Wonderful dialogue and some really lovely details, from the description of the ocean through to the scene at lunch. And the game session really made me laugh. Poor Alan! All the Tracys were captured perfectly. Loved Kyrano too. Thanks for a lovely story. Bee

That was awesome! Poor Alan, getting so totally whipped on any game he tried to play. You definitely gotta feel sorry for the kid!