This is by far my favourite chapter. Mikey gets so much attention, and that makes me happy

it actally is good! :)

Why would you write about my chemical if you don't own any of their stuff? That doesn't matter. I really liked the fan fiction. I thought it was really funny. If you like writing fan fiction then just do it.

the soundboard of the guitar? seriously?

I love this chapter it actually made me cry at the end because 1: the lyrics fits the situation perfectly. And 2: thats my favorite song and I'm going to have it played at my funeral.

Willow better tell Frank or he better find out. If I was one of those two I would be pissed.

U r a talentless straight girl
Please stop

Jk lol this was alright, but it was just missing something! I'm not rly ur mom, I just did that as a dare cuz I'm hanging out w/ some friends.
Sorry if I hurt ur feelings, I didn't mean to.
Please don't take the horrible comment seriously, keep up with the writing, but maybe be a bit more creative, and come up with some more origanal stuff
Sorry again
Here, have a cookie (:;:)

Oh dear god...I don't think I've read a worse piece of writing than this. I read the entire thing, and with every chapt- no, wait, PARAGRAPH, it got worse and worse. Willow rush is not exactly Mary Sue, but is proboly the most annoying female charecter I have ever read in my enitire history of reading (16 years). The chapter in which Ray gets caught drink driving was proboly the worst out of all of them. It was so unrealistic they might as well have all been magic unicorns and it would have been just as belivable. Willow rush is spoilt, irritating, and has no respect. Frank, Mikey, Gerard, Ray and Bob are so out of character it's not even funny. If the words had been slightly misspelt, this could have very easily been a crack FIC. It was just plain out bad, with no plot, and to say that the charecters were two-dimensional would be too high a complement to give to this 'story', if we can even call it that. This whole fanfiction has been one sad illusion after sad illusion, played out in the mind of a sad heterosexual teenage girl. This was plain-out bad, and I suggest that you remove this rubbish from the net before you embarres yourself even more than you have already done.
Sincerely, your mother
Ps, come downstairs right now!

I have read this entire thing five times over. It never gets less painful. I always think it will. Nope.
Thank you for this Venom.

I loved bobs pizza comment! Who the hell leaves pizza on the wall for safe keeping?! Freakin' awesome dude!

Umm I'm only 12 but I get a lot about this and me and my bf broke up recently and I've been crushing on his bff so yeah

broke my fucking heart ;-;

omygod the feels

This story is awesome! The whole gas station incident really reminds me of something me and my friends experienced on a trip...I'm loving this story!