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Nice.

I really don't see the point of writing a story like this only to take out its defining characteristics before you post it. It makes no sense. If you are worried about getting deleted then save a copy of your story elsewhere. They don't always crack down and even when they do they miss A LOT. If you were so worried about the site restrictions against your story then you shouldn't have posted it here at all.

you havent posted this onto adult fanfiction yet?

This version sucked! (compared to the original version I had read before)
Can't wait to read the original version (again)

Damn! that was very good!

OMG, I would love to read this story in it's "unedited" form. Very hot and edgy, and I'm usually a bit turned off by sub/dom stuff, but this was very very good. Excuse my language, but I'm starting to feel a bit c*ckblocked by this phase "part of this scene have been removed due to explicit content"

I recommend posting your stories to LiveJournal, Dreamwidth, or Archive of Our Own (AO3). Those get more traffic than Adultfanfiction and you don't have to worry about the "police'

Hott damn! I needed to read this one! That was PERFECTION! ;-) hugs! - E. ;-)

Wow. That was very very hot. Utterly AMAZING!

Oh!My!HOLY!GOD! it's just so,smut﹏﹏(＃)

"I think I pulled A muscle." rofl...Arron u're so...humorous XDDDD

Domination Station

ow ow merow I like me some domi/sub

plus it was pure smutsmutsmutsmut grrrrowl

i actually found myself panting by the end of that.

btw, my boyfriend loves you ;)

Oh God don't know what to say,this was I have to keep this review short,need to go and see my boyfriend about something.