I can Guess what happend. Not Saying Tho.

That was sweet. Though I don't think ash would be up to doing that sort of thing in the end there. Also how old are they in this story?

Here we go

Looking good. Though it makes me sad to see ash like this and that he needs a wheelchair to get around and May's help to do it

Looking good. I hope ash is gonna be okay

Nice and short.

Ok read this story and I love it the way you got ash and may was wonderful sorry for Dawn but she will have her day when May dies or when she divorces Ash

hey nice story

Good story and all, but at the end wouldn't it be kind of hard to have sex with Ash's bruises and such? Just saying that would kind of hurt.

Another nice story XD. Thanks for writing!

So he is some how held form the fall I like it but how is Abel to get it wellllllll on

I loved the story, but I was'nt sure about the sexual part to it /

Hey, you did a good job at starting this story.

At first, it was sad that Ash almost sacrificed himself for May but Ash is a hero. Heroes are never afraid to give their life for others even for someone they care about.

Again, nice job.

ShadowMann (Also known as TimistheMan)

Nice story, but I'm really clueless here... What did they do?

I bet they played hide and seek upstairs. :P