brilliant. you made me cry!

You had a really strong start to this story, but I think you kinda spiraled it out of control. In my opinion, when you add too many OC’s, they begin to dominate the story and the main characters end up becoming out of character. Also, when his family greets him as “Allen”, it makes no sense. Since Allen revived his name from Mana. I just can’t keep reading after this chapter bc the story has spiraled so much it’s hardly even a fanfic at this point, and more of a story very loosely based in the DGM timeline. Again just my opinion, I don’t mean to be rude

Am I the only one that cried again when Lavi remembered the "dark allen" and their fun times, then cried in relief(after getting the confusion solved) when realised Allen was alive?...

I'm crying

That was great

I was crying at some point (u know the sad part?) so yeah

Nice story.. And i can't ignore the fact that jeniya in arabic literally means female devil ..

It...is amazing and beautiful and I cried for a lot of it but thanks for writing this!

you know... i don't see the earl letting allen die, i see him finding a way to put allen and 14th into a drug induced coma and creating a drug to bring allen's life force back to full health, after having tikki kidnap him and tikki telling earl about his condition, my reasoning being is that in the manga and in the anime, earl seems to think highly of allen despite being on tikki's kill list, i also see him not wanting to lose 14th again

I'm crying right now and my family doesn't care because their used to it now since I'm always reading dgrayman or tokyo ghoul fanfics on my ipad lol

I was just thinking, I don't thing the 14th is actually evil. Yeah he is a Noah and yeah he's hoing to kill aliens loved ones but he also apologized to allen for everything and it makes me think that the 14th isn't evil but something else is... Maybe the 14th is extremely bipolar! I solved it guys! No need to thank me *exagerated hair flip* lol

Allen and kanda love each other like brothers they just don't admit it lol it's very true and no one can tell me otherwise

Anyone else imagine a flowery background and LENALEE and lavi floating to link while they said that? I was laughing so hard!

C'mon link isn't that bad! He actually cares even though he refuses to admit it

This is seriously one of the best fanfiction I have ever read...I cant even review properly because my brain is still in shock...I'm crying sorry...THIS WAS JUST SO COMPLETELY BEAUTIFUL! Seriously the grammar, plot, characters were just so on point that I am speechless. So I thank you for putting this story on this website and for making my day! I hope you had a wonderful day because I know that this day is now complete for me...thanks again