I hope that you decide to finish this story one day. It is amazing

One of my favorite leyton fanfics ever! So well written! I just wanted to know where this story ends :(

Okay- omg that was intense. I hope Peyton and Rathan are ok -please let Rachel and the baby be okay. I love this story and I especially love the TV characters you used for this fic. It's was very well written. Oh, no way was I think it shippy with Brucas - Luke was just helping her because she close to him and he's trying to get her and Ari to safe grounds. I would love to know what's gonna happen next. This is way to good to stop now. I also wanna see Leyton as a couple. So please please update soon...

Omg- I love love love Peyton and Rachel relationship their too funny. I love that no matter what they are always there for each other. I really love that you put Chris Keller in the fic - he made the story so much fun to read. I like the banter with Lucas mostly and with Rachel as well. Peyton looks like she wants to choke him everytime she sees him lol. I hope Rathan gave a healthy baby. I really like how you wrote Leyton in this story and I love the fact that they are in love with each other- yay!:). I see the Brooke and Bevin is really enjoying themselves at the bachelorette party lol- that's too funny. I wonder what is in that cigarette box Luke is always carry around. I think it may have some souvenir of his late friend JB - meh who knows. I'm glad that Luke has Peyton to talk to and encourage him to put his demons in the past and move forward. Glad he went to see the Colonel Fray. I hope everything goes well. This was a good chapter.. I loved it.

Okay- wth just happened?. Why is Lucas freaking out- and I wonder who is this man. I think maybe he's from his former army base or something. I'm dying to find out thou. I loved that roof scene with Leyton. I love that Peyton and Lucas are interacting more and more but I wonder if by doing so will it lead to something more or maybe it will be just friendships. I would love to know what happened between Peyton and Julian back then. He must have screw up royally for Peyton to have such disdain for him. Great update...

Oh wow, I'm glad that Lucas finally came to his senses and made things right with his brothers and Rachel- it's been long overdue. I'm loving the fact that Peyton was the one who kinda pushed him make amends and apologize to his family. I think it's so cute how Peyton try to act as if she don't want Lucas but she so does lol. Omg- I can't believe Rathan is having a baby- I'm so elated for them. Lovely chapter. Let's see what happens next...

Well, I love that you gave us a background of what life was like for Lucas and Nathan living with Dan. I mean damn that was hardcore. I applaud Luke for protecting Nathan so that he wouldn't witness the horrible things Dan did to him. That must have been extremely hard growing up. I'm glad he escaped and went into the army but I knew he felt horrible for bailing on his lil brother. I wish Lucas didn't snapped at everyone because it's so not fair but I fathom how he might've felt. He should definitely apologize to everyone for behaving like a dickwad. I really like that Peyton was the one to check his ass and told him to stop blaming the world for shit that happened to his father. Omg- I can't believe Jake proposed to Brooke ekkk- I'm so happy for them. I swear Keller is freaking hilarious in thus story I love him. I absolutely loved the ending Leyton together was nice. I would love if they both can talk about what's going with them and hopefully they can help each other get thru whatever it is. I so want them to just be with each other like yesterday lol. This was a very well written chapter. Amazing update.. Looking forward to reading more..

Oh wow. That was kinda intense. First off, I love Peyton/Rachel relationship they are so too cute. I mean the fact that they are best friends IRL it's just perfect in this fic. I love the birthday rituals it's nice. Lol I love the banter/bickering between the two it's too funny. Boy that elevator scene Keller and the girls was omg insanely intense and kinda awkward lol. I wanna know what happened last year and how bad was it- I mean it's like forbidden for anyone to talk about. The end was amazing- I love an angsty Leyton it was so good. I hope that Peyton realizes that Lucas just wanna get to know her and maybe help him talk about his past as well. I can't wait to see them together as a couple and happy. Cheery ass Brooke smh I can't with her lol. Fantastic update...

Wow. So that bar scene was pretty hilarious. I love the Keller/Lucas bromance- they are pretty funny together. I can't believe Lucas was gonna try to hit on Haley smh. Omg- Rathan conversation was something else. I can't believe Nathan wants to buy a darn motorcycle like tf - he must be on drugs lol. I can fathom why Rachel snapped at him hell I probably do the same thing. I hope they work out everything. That roof scene was again was nice. Love the conversation between Leyton- I'm glad Peyton kinda opened up to Luke about what's going on with her. Oh my gawd - that Leyton kiss was oh so good. I knew Peyton was gonna go cold turkey on Lucas. I wish she would just let him in. I wonder what's gonna happen now with Lucas and Peyton. Amazing chapter. Loved it. Off to the next chapter...

Omg- that was a great chapter. I love Leyton together. It's funny how Peyton act as if she not bothered by Lucas but in fact she is so into him. I feel they gon hook up real soon. On that note, I kinda pissed at douchebag Julian for making P. Sawyer swore of dating fellow doctors. Oh my gawd, it's so cute how Lucas totally turn that guessing game into finding out about Peyton's past. I'm like well played grasshopper lol. I can't wait until Leyton get hot and heavy with each other. I love how Lucas and Keller got each other's back. Imma need Julian to fall all the way back please and thank you lol. I am so looking forward to reading more...,great update..

Okay, I'm loving this story more and more. I know Rachel hated that the group accepted Lucas as a colleague even thou she didn't want him be apart of it lol sorry Rach but they like him haha. Omg Keller and Luke's relationship in this fic it's too funny. I'm loving how Luke thinks he's being subtle about him wanting Peyton but I like how Peyton's hiding her wanting him as well. This is too good- I don't think Julian likes Lucas thou and we all know why lol. The brotherly bonding was very nice, I like that they were somewhat civil with each other but at the same time- I love the banter between the two. Uh, that roof scene was amazing- love the Peyton/ Lucas dynamics. You can tell they both are getting under each other's skin. I loved it. I can't wait to see more angsty Leyton- they are so much fun to read. Fantastic update and well written. Looking forward to reading more.

Okae. I'm loving this fic. Lucas and Peyton omg you can feel the sexual tension between the two. I mean damn, Peyton is starting to think about the blue eye blonde hair doctor like omg. I'm loving Keller in this story he's hella funny. Brooke and Jake awww so cute(odd pairing but still cute). I love that all the gang seems to be making an appearance in this story - I love that. Can't wait to see the rest of the gang especially Skillz, Haley and Mouth. Okay, I wasn't expecting Julian thou but oh well. I wonder if him and P. Sawyer used to date or he wants her or idk. I wonder what he wants thou- he kinda seemed annoyed a little bit. Omg the Leyton eye sex yes god- I'm here for it. I can't wait til Lucas slowly start to break down Peyton's walls. I'm dying for the brothers to reunite it should be good. Oh I can't wait to find out what happens next...

Lucas you are not in Kansas anymore lol- this is a whole new ballgame. Oh snap- the claws are out lol. Lucas, I think you are on her shit list already. I love the banter between Leyton thou it was very entertaining. I know Lucas is gonna have to grovel a little to get on her good side. I'm so loving this story already its really good. Love the Lucas/Chris interaction it was kinda funny, and Rachel/Lucas one as well. Well I just wanna see if anyone of the girls are gonna wanna hook up with Luke. I can't wIt to see what happens next... Awesome update..

Omg - I love this story already. I can tell it's gonna be a very interesting one. Love the hospital scene with this fic- it's different but I think imma enjoy it nonetheless. Omg I love that Chris Keller is in this fic and he's a top notch surgeon. It's gonna be fun. I really like how you wrote Peyton in this fic, kinda reminds of S1 Peyton- I mean the bitchy snarky blonde chick. Her and CK interaction was hella funny- "It's way too early Keller," she snapped, "come back at twenty past never." Omg that line had me rolling lol. I love the Rathan pairing and I can't wait until Lucas makes his appearance. This is gon be one hellava fic. Nice start...

i just read your story and it's pretty damn great, too bad it's not finish. This story deserves better than just a fanfiction, it should be a novel..