AH! It says 'to be continued' but there's no continuation! This is a really good story, but unfortunately, you will be responsible for my demise if you don't write more soon, as the suspense is killing me. Later!

Just like in the show . . . just when you think your going to get a story where TR isn't going to interupt things, boom~!

cute story and by the way, LOVE your name!;)

Oh wow, that was so. . . WAFFY! Can't wait to see how Ash and Misty turn out! ;) -Chibikat

Awwwwwww man! And it was just gettin good too!

And who is going to interupt them after TR? Brock? Pikachu? even Giovonni? Very interesting. I bet Ash is going to get fed up with this one. )

Great! Hurry up and finish it!

Hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry urry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry ...etc _;;

Uh, this might sound annoying but Misty hates carrots, peppers, and bugs. She said so herself. And... what type of fish CAN they eat in the Pokemon World? I mean, a magikarp is just bone and scale, and you don't really eat goldeen 'cause they're like goldfish.. and no one eats goldfish.

Why does team rocket have to ruin everything! Please continue, you've got me hooked up on this story! Keep up the good work and good luck! Sincerely, Roxy

ARGHH! NO NO NO! So close! LOL, this is cute and I wanna read more, so get more up soon, I'm keeping an eye on this! Great stuff!