omg how i love incest and mikan and natsume

I love the ending, "/Scene/"

I can't usually tolerate incest but for some reason this doesn't really bother me at all. The ending was actually hilarious. Natsume was so cheeky! XD

kkkkk surprise

please update! They should get married! INCEST

And the plot thickens?
It ends there? why? You should definitely continue

This story is soooooooo epic please when I read that last part I was like "OH S**T, IT'S ABOUT TO GO DOWN!

Siblingssss

Oh my gosh, u really should contuine the story! Plz plz plz, the story's too good to leave unfinished! . and when I was reading this the idea came to me, what happened if I was in love with my brother... It made me want to puke, coz my bro's all nasty and stuff, but this is Natsume and Mikan we're talking about, so no matter what they would b perfect for each other .

Gahhh so sweet! Omg why are you not continuing?! Please do write another chapter. Please please please! There are not many incest stories that is so filled with guilt, love and lust at the same time. You make incest actually sound acceptable!

Me: .God. Dafuq did I just read.
Brain: You, my Inept Dear have just read a greatly written story of incest by an awesome author. Problem?

But seriously this is a cool story, probably the best written story in the incest category. I salute you dear author-san

3 that's so cute!
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oh em giii! update soon. even though it's awkward that they're siblings.

This piece is full of guilt , lust , love
Beautifull forbidden love !
Love it love it love it !
Update !
But you explain things here so fast .
I like the idea by the way so i don't care.
Thx for writing this

I'm Disappointed