that's. . . kind of scary in a way. . . yet also almost beautiful. does that make sense? it's frighteningly lovely. yeah.

Creepy... Love this, though! Poor Alfons, though! I actually think leaving like that made things worse! :( Now he'll think he's crazy AND miss his best friend, not to mention hurt everyone who ever knew Ed! So sad! LOVE this! Rock on!

Aww. Really nice story. Gets you thinking. But I think that Ed did do SOME good in Heidrichs life.

I'd like to know what happens next. Did you repost it on another site? if so, please tell me what it is.

Wow, great story idea.

It's very mysterious and I can't wait to read what happens next :)

Poor Ed, he feels... Sad. Or worse. Depressed...? Great story. I'd like to see an epilogue of this, or a story that explained where Ed went, or his travels after leaving Alfons. :) Keep up the great work.