LMAO, a bolt of lightning? Really? That couldn't harm Goku at his weakest.

Also, I had to read 3 lines of repeated heroic dialogue where you can't distinguish "you're" and "your". Work on your English.

wow i wonder if trunks 18 and the namek can defete this enemy and what it will take good work.

i understand trunks disire to not have anything too do with her however she bis a changed person or andrid she is noty the same so you cannot treat her the story so far keap up the good work.

i wonder if trunks will start trusting 18 even train her to help him protect the3 planet.

i wonder how trunks will explain this situation that se3lll reveled to 18 that 17 was her brother. i expect 18 too be angry with him. she bis not6 the same person she was before. exelent tsory and chapter keep up the good work

great fighting chapter i hope that this will show that 18 does care for trunks however bi still expect trunks to be weary arouned her.

i wonder how trunks is going to explain this to his mother.

wow that all i can say that was a good explmation of what might have happened.i loved this chapter keap up the good work.

i hope trunks and bulma can tolerate will defenetly hagve to ern their home she never re3gains her memory. lets hope she wants to defend the bis ba very good fanfict.

i wonder what bulma will think wene he brings android 18 hoe with him. will she reprogram trunks and biulma ever trust her probably not considering how many people.

Great read throughout, like another reviewer said I wish you gave 18 more reasons to like Trunks and spend a chapter or 2 showing them talking and forming a bond. Outside of that it was amazing, thank you.

This was a great fanfic that actually has another cool mishap that starts it all, unlike the other fanfics where they just have sex. I couldn’t help but feel a little disappointed by the ending, where they ended up using all 10 other wishes anyway, and the sudden appearance of Zangya and the others. But then again this story had gone on long enough and the rest would just feel like rinse and repeat, so I can see why you stopped so suddenly. Still, I love the fact that 18 and Trunk’s relationship was based on a misunderstanding, plus they random seduction of 18. In my personal opinion I would’ve liked that Trunks would end up breaking, and telling 18 of her true past on one of her seductive moments, but I’m just a sucker for those breaking points. This is Gold and deserves a sequel if the future timeline had more villains made out of thin air, like super, but I’m fine with the GT ending. I love this story and hope to see more like these. Catch you later!

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28th review.
I've just finished the story.
This was an amazing DBZ AU.
This was gripping, romantic, dramaric, funny, sad, happy, and above all, very entertaining. I may just reread this whole thing again.
Well done.
Have a great day, and continue making such great stories.

27th review.
Wow. Pure amazingness.
18 and her child are brought back, Trunks has finally confessed his love, and we've still got an epilogue left to iron put the details. Well done. This story is amazing.