I've notice this story and the one before when I've been searching for some SxE stories(I'm obsessed with those)but know I'm looking at some of the other stories I passed over(skipping the ones that involve ExA or SxT...well I might consider SxT but anyways I am thoroughly enjoying your story.

One question though will we ever see Luna's human form cause in the story Saphira canged to human form saying luna could too. And I'm interested at what she would look like and what she would do. I'm also wondering if u will bring a male dragon into the story be it Eragon or some other lost dragon cause u brought another female dragon into the story.

Also I got a kick out of the "Gareth" and the "king" caracters.

even better than the last story!

When are you going to update?

About time I got back to this story, huh?

Great chapter. Probably the best I have read from you. It's clear that you spent a lot of time writing it, with a lot of thought going into every event.

Criticisms first, of a sort.

I was actually kind of glad to finally have a chapter without a battle scene. It was getting a bit boring, to be honest (odd, that battle should be the boring part). I actually can't find too much to critique in this one, due to how good it was. Other than a few misspellings and the like, it was really quite good.

Other notes:

I feel like this is the first chapter with a lot of character development. Before this point, it was always plot, plot, plot, with comparatively little about who the characters actually were. It's difficult, because your two main characters are from an actual novel, but I feel that in this chapter you finally made Saphira your own, rather than just using a pre-made mold of personality.

I really enjoyed Azera. I can tell you just loved writing about her, because it shows, in the care with which you described her actions, even though it was through another character's point of view.

While on the subject of first-person narration, I have to say, your writing seems much more natural in this form. I would definitely encourage writing in this manner in the future; you've managed to get thoughts, feelings, and true depth to Saphira in this chapter.

In terms of storyline and plot, I know that you have already written several chapters after this one, but I'm excited to see where this goes. Whereas before I was fairly confused by the plot and where you were going with it, now I feel like I'm starting to see a bigger piece of the picture.

Well, it was a blast to read, I'll get on those next chapters soon, I promise!

i love this story i hope u make it a ExS story but i would understand if u didnt plz update soon

wow, I think that you are a great writer. Keep Going!

Well he seemed like they were close at some point in their lives. But then he became more of a jerk and they grew apart.

Yay! We heard from LUNA!

hmm its nice to c luna again nd i can't wait to find out what will happen with eragon,saphira and the wolves

terri

i think eragon and saphira will meet luna before confronting galbotrix or luna will have a run in with her brother

good story btw

Terri

I bet she's happy to finally get back to her normal form huh?

Azaela (I think) wanted to keep Saphira as a pet! That was crazily hilarious. Great job dude.

Your story is great, i think it was a fun idea to make Saphira transform into a human, although maybe a little weird. But i got a question: why doesn't Saphira just transform back into a dragon when the new dragon grabs her in its claws?

That dragon better not hurt her or it is in huge trouble!

Dude if you keep getting down on yourself like that. I'm going to find you and whap you upside the head! The chapter was great.

HAHAHA! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!

I cannot believe he took so long to realize it was Saphira!