Alright... I've finished reading this fic, so here are my thoughts~ :D

Plot: I like it. It's different. I don't see a lot of fics like this that uses this type of idea. It really has a lot of potential to be expanded into a chaptered fic, if you wish to make it so. There is just so much to talk about.

Portrayal: There're too many POVs. So many and each view is so short that I'm barely able to get the feel of the story before the view is changed to another. You also have the tendency to use very long and complicated sentences; so long that I have to reread some of them a few times in order to understand it. It gets very confusing. *or maybe I was sleepy when I read it OTL*

Well, aside from that, and the occasional error, this is a very cute fic. The ending wrapped it all up nicely. Ha, I totally squinted and saw the IchiRuki at the end :D

Keep writing! 3

i LOVE it! i love all the skating technical terms and i actually know what some are from watching the winter olympics this past year xDD Ichigo~! ah~ how i love this idea~ i'm planning on doing it sometime, possibly with Shirosaki ;3 but i'll prolly do it eventually too x3 j'adore it~!

Cute, cute, cute~ x3

I'm glad you finished it, Ema-tan. :D It was worth the wait~ :3